In inquiry field, beginner make more contribution than experts
Field of investigation is very important in our society and it is nearly connected with police, military. In this field, skill and experienced knowledge are necessary.Though novices do not have experienced and they are not adept, they have an unquenchable desire to explore everything which leads them to collect many informations during inquiry. For this reason I corroborate with the author's thesis.
During the time of inquiry, adepts try to solve that with their pragmatically expertise, they correlate the new inquiry with their old ones. Because of this, they miss out some important figures which may be very important to solve the investigation. As a beginner does not have enough knowledge or qualifications so, he investigates every little things very subtly. This discern quality make him able to find out essential clues which are very much important to solve a case. By this way, a novice can play an important role in inquiry than an expert.
In police or any investigation office or works, qualified persons are in high rank and the tyros are in the entry level. In other words, They are assigned to solve the cases. Once some of the thieves’ stolen enormous expensive things from my house, then my father go to the cops and ask them to inquiry about this. Throughout the period, cops investigate the complain and the cops are constitute of both beginner and skilled person. I have noticed that beginner had enlightened many topics which were ignored by the experts. In addition to this, these information’s help them to catch the thieves. From this I have learned that a fledgling makes an important contribution in any inquiry.
Besides, beginners are ardent and they have the fresh mind so, they are very much active and enthusiastic to their work. At a time, experts life become monotonous, because of this they will do their work languidly. They may lost their interest from their work which can make them avoid many important clues. As beginners are aver to their work, so they try with their level best and are very fruitful.
At the end, I want to summarize that both experts and fledgling are very important in inquiry but fledgling have more ability to reveal some hidden things which might be paramount in any inquiry. So, they play more important role than experts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, then, thus, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96640826873 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7766249636 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509043927649 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0806825714 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5238095238 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181822124479 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531467378226 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467056112675 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103235817014 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043435668763 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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