It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A belief is something related oneself. An upright person, following the rules and regulations of a nation might not compromise on his belief rather will adhere to it. though opponents may try to strike him, he will stand against all odds and will escape from such situations knowing that it is fatal. I agree on the fact that it is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
In india, children tend to grow up hearing the stories of Ramayana and Mahabharata from their grandparents. Right from childhood, they are instilled with good values and belief that should be accepted and used in personal life. Since it becomes predominant in the minds of kids at a very young age, it is very difficult to compromise for other’s personal gain. For example, christianity was spread to india, a country where a greater number of Hindus lived. Even though vast majority comprised of Hindu’s, india is known for its rich and cultural diversification whereby men and women of all caste, creed and religious belief dwell here. When there was an attack on christians with churches being demolished and bombs exploded, due to religious faith, most of them did not convert into another religion. In such a case, adhering to one’s belief tends to be harmful.
moreover, think of national leaders who gave their life in order to save us from atrocities. if they had compromised on non – violence acts, we would not be able to lead the comfortable life we enjoy now. Gandhiji, for instance, never bothered to give up satyagraha and continued to fight against the Britishers to get a new and independent india. All his efforts could have been futile had he compromised on his belief of a free nation worrying about the difficulties he was going to face.
moreover, Students who cheat on exams should try to rectify it as only good principles and values of life will take them to a better path. Nevertheless, consider the instance throughout the world where children are made to believe in the story of Santa Claus bringing gifts to them. they should understand the true picture that it is only their parents and relatives who bring gifts for them and not an imaginative person. if they don’t change their mindset after growing up, it will result in their friends and family members mocking them.
Thus, in a nutshell, the above points could be reiterated that, belief projects a person’s identity. adhering to it is less harmful that compromising on it. Therefore, to lead a righteous life, humans are expected to face the challenges of the world rather than to be reticent thinking about the dangers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92410714286 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72983314485 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573660714286 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1450479209 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140826813522 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501002789563 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072136685197 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827919540955 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449533122989 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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