It is no longer possible for society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reason and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The claim states that humans today cannot regard any living individual as a hero. Specifically, I feel "society" has been generalized under a single umbrella without taking into consideration that the definition of a hero can be different for every person and therefore I strongly disagree with the claim.
Every individual draws inspiration from a variety of sources like movies, incidents, people or even nature. Specifically in case of humans, for example, all the famous atheletes are an inspiration for kids following the respective sport. A 10 year old boy playing football in Argentina, naturally looks up to Lionel Messi as his hero or an upcoming cricket batsman in India may idolize Sachin Tendulkar. Thus, there are individuals in society today that idolize and seek inspiration from living men and women who are no less than heroes.
In the past, when many countries were under foreign rule, freedom fighters laid their lives for independence. Examples like Mahatma Gandhi, aptly called the Father of the Nation in India is a global hero. Similarly, the contributions of Martin Luther King and Nelson Mandela, in the entire movement for the liberation of African-Americans are extraordinary and they deserve all the admiration they have today. However, the contributions of influential individuals today, fighting against evils of society, cannot be compared with these martyrs. The injustice and ill practices predominant in the society today are completely different and equally important and therefore cannot be undermined.
The covid-19 has spread across the world. With governments worldwide fighting to save lives, the doctors and health officals are nothing less than heroes. Risking their own lives along with their families, these individuals are effortlessly working with inadequate facilities to save our lives. The police officials and local health workers trying to contain the virus by setting up quardoning off hotspots and containment zones are also working selflessly while the entire world is watching from the safety of their homes. Ignoring these contributions and not recognizing these living heroes today would be a huge mistake.
Keeping in mind these examples mentioned hitherto, it can be inferred that the definition of a hero can vary significantly from person to person. Thus, the general claim that we cannot find heroes in today's living world is not true at all. For an individual, someone as simple as his or her parent can also be a hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3578680203 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96140256916 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586294416244 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9821608094 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.105263158 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155363224602 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496858130866 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402353084912 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957838183887 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463284435412 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.