Claim : The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in today's times.
Reason : Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study.
Education plays a crucial role in determining the course of every individual's life. It can pave the way for success and help us reach our intended goals. It must be noted that every individual has a unique set of skills and likings. It is therefore essential for any education system to allow a student to identify these skillsets and pursue a career accordingly. I personally feel that labelling multidisciplinary education as "overrated" is wrong because it gives an individual a chance to identify his liking and inclination and enables him to choose how he wishes to make a living.
The reason stated for the claim, which stresses on the fact that students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study, maybe right. However, this does not make multidisciplinary education overrated. One must realise, pursuing a particular career is a students choice. However, having a fair understanding of how professions, other than the one he chooses to pursue, work, can be advantageous. The Indian government, in its recent change in education policy, made teaching subjects like carpentry, basic electronics, and programming mandatory in schools. Surely, a particular child will not pursue all these professions simultaneously. However, the fundamental skillsets that he learns during such an education are key for surviving in today's world.
The University of Pune, a prestigious academic institution in India, has made it mandatory for all students pursuing degrees in engineering to learn about various domains of engineering. Each student spends a year studying the roles of various engineers, irrespective of his or her specialization. Engineers are crucial for the day to day working of the world as we know it, and learning about the various branches of engineering makes the student realise how he fits into this big picture. He may choose to focus on a specific specialization but without understanding the cooperative nature of the job, acheiving maximum out of any job can be difficult. A multi-disciplinary education allows for such an exposure.
I, therefore, feel every individual should be exposed to various fields of study during his education
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...role in determining the course of every individuals life. It can pave the way for success a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...has a unique set of skills and likings. It is therefore essential for any educatio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32658959538 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3571239674 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0390685771 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339524204851 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974776505 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812487696754 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204583254686 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656270128092 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...role in determining the course of every individuals life. It can pave the way for success a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...has a unique set of skills and likings. It is therefore essential for any educatio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32658959538 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3571239674 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0390685771 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339524204851 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974776505 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812487696754 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204583254686 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656270128092 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.