It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Before we begin to assess our standing on the prompt stated, we must understand whom we would like to declare as heroes. Is it someone who does a great self less deed? Or someone who portrays to be one of selfless deeds? However, I do believe, our society does consist of people worthy of being called heroes of our day.
To begin with, let us discuss the definition of a hero. While it may vary for every individual, one's hero is likely to be a person whom one looks up to and aspires to become someday! This so called hero could well be a father, a mother, an elder sibling or even some notable person in the society. Whilst violence and vices are at its peak in our society today, there still exists a significant number of people who are playing their part of being a hero to many. Let us take the example of Kailash Satyarthi. He is a human rights activist mainly involved in campaigning for child rights. While there existed heartless humans who would would make children as young as of the age 7 to do manual labor, the world gave a kind and courageous soul as that of Kailash who braved all odds and took drastic measures to fight against this inhumanity. And it was rewarding journey! He successfully liberated more than 90,000 children from child labor, slavery and trafficking. If this act is not considered commensurate of a hero, I doubt anything else is.
Another example I would like to illustrate in order to cite another human hero amongst us, is that of a "not so popular" Indian film actor - Sonu Sood. With India being one of the most populated countries in the world along with a high percentage of cheap labor population among it, this subset of labor population met with tremendous difficulties during the Covid-19 lockdown period. Thousands were stranded in multiple cities as inter-state transport was banned. Hundreds of them facing starvation since they were left penniless in an unknown city. This particular Indian actor, took efforts to make ends meet for these citizens. He arranged for special buses and trains which carried the daily wage laborers back to their home town. He further booked an entire flight for a group of laborers stranded in Delhi, trying to find their way back to Mumbai! Rather, he went so far as to bring back stranded Indian citizens in Dubai , safely back home. Unlike other wealthy or popular actors of the film industry, he did not hesitate to help the people in the hour of need rather than saving up his money for some fancy likings.
In conclusion, while some people say that the world today is filled with hatred and violence , citing the examples of riots or deaths, I would request them to find the good in people and keep up the hope as where there is hope, there is light. And good people will surely turn up at the right time as your hero.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...While it may vary for every individual, ones hero is likely to be a person whom one ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: would
...hile there existed heartless humans who would would make children as young as of the age 7 ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...other human hero amongst us, is that of a 'not so popular' Indian film ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g back stranded Indian citizens in Dubai , safely back home. Unlike other wealthy ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...today is filled with hatred and violence , citing the examples of riots or deaths,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, as to, even so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6374501992 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43672518848 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4517044874 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109696067833 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321411806518 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325515183267 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619726516352 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165365729521 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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