It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
What is wrong in recognizing living people as heroes? There are several living examples of heroism around the world. The statement is undoubtedly refutable in general, however some exceptional cases might exist.
To begin with, it makes more sense to accolade heroes for their achievements while they are alive than to appreciate them after they cease to exist. No matter how vastly they get appreciated, it won't make any difference to the dead.
Moreover in contrast to the statement, not regarding living people as heroes may exasperate them. They might feel discorded and indignant because they will expect the society to acknowledge their achievements, rather than pretend that their accomplishments were indifferent.
Additionally, it encourages others to do what is right. When people see others getting recognized, they might covet the respect and popularity, or they might get inspired to adhere these heroes as their ideals. A recent movie released in India, acknowledging the achievements of a women wrestler, has inspired several parents against gender discrimination and kindled an egalitarian approach to study and sports.
However, one can challenge that in this era of internet, heroes will have tough time to live up to the people's expectations after getting the recognition, the expedite access to information may tint the ideal image citizens have about the heroes. For evidence, Mr. Snowden, who blew the whistle over NSA's illegal operations. While many consider him as a hero, there are those who disparage his actions. The consistent focus of media over his past life and his current situation has indeed dented the respect he received in the beginning.
Conclusively, it is important to understand that heroes are not born they are made. Therefore it is equally important to acknowledge their achievements as protecting them from focused attention of media for mere collection of TRPs as they too are normal people with normal life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ctations after getting the recognition, the expedite access to information may tint the idea...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...that heroes are not born they are made. Therefore it is equally important to acknowledge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34838709677 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90598435254 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4955161295 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840738849202 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310558026316 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259675565619 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047071286492 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019182367222 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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