It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We meet different people in our walk of life. Some bring out the best in us while others bring the worst. It is on us to find the people we want to be a part of and how it will help us in defining and shaping ourselves. Even if a person thinks he does not need someone to survive, that can never be the case. We, as humans, have always tried to be around our kind, right from the very start of life. It is important to find the kind of people you want to be like.
Our social group includes the people we took instant liking towards; there is no constraint when it comes to age. For every place, there is a different circle we are associated to or mutually related to. If there is a group of kids in college that are famous for causing troubles has an innocent friend with them, though he did not do anything, he is also considered to be like the majority of the people in his group. One day, if few of his friends were caught stealing from someone’s locker while others were able to run from the scene, all of them will be caught and questioned because they hung out together every day. Unknowingly or may be unintentionally he is also considered a bad guy which has hampered his reputation.
Although we tend to defend ourselves when someone tells us we are acting like one of our friends, it is true that we inhibit some of their vices, even if we never wanted to. To become a good and successful human being, it is important to be around who share the same thoughts because they will help in cultivating your dreams. Often, our parents stop us from being around certain kind of people and we don’t really understand why, but there is always a possibility of absorbing their traits which will never help us in our future.
Moreover, we inculcate the habits of the people in our social group. For instance, if there is a drug addict in the group, chances are high that others will become too even if they once hated that habit. Troublemakers who don’t care about anyone other than themselves are dangerous too. We never know when their trouble will cross certain limit and they may pass the blame and punishment to us. All this tells us to keep our eyes and ears and mind wide open when we involve ourselves in a certain group, so as to save us from a future catastrophe.
Our social circle primarily defines our character and behaviour, which if once ossified can be nearly impossible to change. A good amount of observation is required before calling yourself one of their kinds, because it could be difficult to detach yourself from them emotionally and mentally. Therefore, for a person to be regarded as someone with a good heart and mind, it is necessary for him to choose the best type of people in his social are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he kind of people you want to be like. Our social group includes the people we ...
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...guy which has hampered his reputation. Although we tend to defend ourselves whe...
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...hich will never help us in our future. Moreover, we inculcate the habits of the...
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...e involve ourselves in a certain group, so as to save us from a future catastrophe. ...
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...ines our character and behaviour, which if once ossified can be nearly impossible ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 33.0505617978 221% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44642857143 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45567197757 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8489195597 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.863636364 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166776942813 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549111766567 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430222862366 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985017452042 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168299814209 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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