It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As a person grows up, he or she starts discovering new things and aspects about themselves. Individuals start to find their place in the universe and they try to fraternize with individuals with whom they share a common interest for something. It is primarily thorough our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. I agree with such an assertion, since in my opinion when a human identifies a certain quality about a certain group that he or she likes, in a way, it signals the human about the facets of the world that he or she is enthralled with. This helps an individual better understand about themselves and helps define their character. I will further elaborate on my position, with the help of a few examples, in the paragraphs below.
As adolescents, humans find social groups on the playground of their school or in the play area of their residential complex. In either case, kids usually form social groups, wherein the main distinction between the groups would be the kind of sport that they like to play. It can be possible that one group likes playing cricket, whereas the other group loves playing soccer. Nevertheless, in both these cases, the kids are defined by their penchant for the sports they love. A new kid, who has visited the playground for the first time will look at the various groups playing and then ultimately select the sport that he finds fascinating, or the one he loves, and will acquaint himself with the group that is playing that sport. Due to such an instance, the new kid knows the sport that he likes, and identifies a new aspect about himself.
Growing up through the years, humans mingle with various social groups, be it in their college or in the outside world. In colleges there are various social groups that are formed, such as the drama club, or the dance club and many more. As soon as a student enters college and starts looking for the various clubs that are currently running in his college, he might come across a club that he wishes to be a part of since the core concept of the club pleases him. He might be a avid follower of theater plays and might decide to join the drama club. These social affiliations help a person discover hidden aspects within themselves that he can work on and choose to pursue a career in. The person can wish to pursue a career in drama and who knows, he can become a successful actor. Such a discovery isn't possible unless we identify social groups and people with whom we share something in common.
As we grow up into mature adults, we often identify individuals in our own city that have a common interest such as ours. There can be social groups such as a group of supporters that follow the same football club as you do. Owing to such similarity, it can help a person enter such groups and discover aspects about himself that he was unaware about. It can also be the case that a person joins a bunch of people, who are watching a football match at a bar and find the team they are supporting attractive and you yourself develop a liking for the sport and the team. Instances such as these help you define yourselves, the things you like and which motivate you.
In sum, I strongly support the assertion that it is primarily thorough our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Social groups can be responsible for helping us identify hidden aspects about ourselves. Such hidden interests can go about a long way in helping a person find himself and find peace with what he loves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 92.0 33.0505617978 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2899.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49147904787 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435897435897 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 874.8 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7713405735 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.37037037 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229683117243 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777155592128 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803241287952 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144983086396 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541564350527 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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