It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some people contend that the only way of defining ourselves is to contact with outside, especially with social cliques, in which people are given the specific status that makes everyone distinctive. However, I hold the opposite view that our identification derives internally.
Admittedly, it's generally acknowledged that social groups is conducive to give people an identity. To be more specific, most of juveniles' role in this society are students, thus such identification represents a group of people who are absorbing knowledge and immature more or less. Also, the movie stars are respected by thousands of people, so their identification is stardom. No matter what role one is playing, all of them have their own identities coming from society.
However, such identities are superficial and inaccurate, when diverse stages of life are taken into consideration. For a person living in this world, he/she has totally divergent identities in different stages of life. He would be a student at the age ranging from 6-18, while when he steps into society, he would be a man who have to take respond for more things. In the end, he would turn into an old man without vigor, spending his declining years with family. Therefore, for a person, his identification is changing as his age.
Apart from that, even at one life stage, it is likely that the identification given by society is unnecessarily true. This is because, nowadays, people are more interesting in one’s sensational part than other characters. While, the facts of some obtrusive characteristics would be likely contorted by people. Michael Jackson was one of the most famous singers all around the world, nevertheless he was accused of the plastic surgery by thousands of American black men who blindly thought Michael was shame of his identity as a black. MJ's scandal was so sensational that many people did not care about his philanthropic contribution as a humanitarian that actually saved myriad people's life. His news hit the headlines of newspaper, during which he was defined as a negative presentative by society. However, from the present perspective, the accusations were unreal and he should be respected by people for his tremendous contribution in the field of music and beneficence. The idea of social groups defining us is facile.
Last but not least, in my opinion, people's identification is defined by thoughts. The identification consists of reviews for one's character and behaviors and the thoughts always dominate such evaluations. Therefore, it is the thoughts that are conducive for the formation of identification to everyone. Only people have their own thoughts, even though without outside world, they are capable of distinguishing themselves from others, because of the behaviors and personality belonging to them. To be more specific, when one is living solitary life, segregating himself from society, such as a monk, he still have an identification in this world, owing this ideas and thoughts which cannot be obliterated by not contacting with outside.
In a nutshell, it is obvious that real identification derives from people's thoughts instead of the connection with social group that are always facile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the juveniles') or simply say ''most juveniles''.
Suggestion: most of the juveniles; most juveniles
...eople an identity. To be more specific, most of juveniles role in this society are students, thus...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sensational part than other characters. While, the facts of some obtrusive characteri...
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Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... identification consists of reviews for ones character and behaviors and the thought...
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Line 8, column 608, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... from society, such as a monk, he still have an identification in this world, owing ...
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Line 8, column 652, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... an identification in this world, owing this ideas and thoughts which cannot be obli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, while, apart from, as to, such as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0720414979 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505859375 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3539704583 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.16 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.48 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13473455327 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450749202764 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042393388262 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926049842921 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439149979921 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.