It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
The author of the statement stated that human behavior is largely affected by the social group along which they are associated. Many of us will argue that this will not hold all the time, while others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the argument and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
The social group plays a vital role in the life of a human being as we learn many new things and teach the new thing to others or in other words get influenced by someone's other actions or qualities. When a baby is born his first social interaction is with his parent and other family members and he will imbibe a lot of qualities from them like language. The first kind of social group that a person encounters when introduced into this world is his or her parents and other family members.
Furthermore, when a child starts going to school, he will create his or her second social group and I would say that this group will largely responsible for shaping the behavior of a person, as we spend a lot of time from childhood to the teenager in school. In this period of time if you get a good company as a friend then there will be higher chances that you will become a good citizen for your country and vice-versa. So, the second stage that is the school group will play a crucial role in an individual’s life.
Moreover, considering the case of politics, we have several factions or parties competing for the ruling post, because each one has a different set of motives. For instance, in the United States, we have two major parties: The Democratics and The Republicans; each one has a unique set of ideals and strives towards the development of the nation. By examining which party a person belongs to or associate himself with, we can come to a conclusion about the belief held by the person. This case is applicable to party workers, who choose to devote their lives to the party because of the ideals found in the concerned party allures them to a great extent. Hence, identification with political parties also paves the way for extracting the nature of a person without delving deep into his activities.
However, the habit or qualities that we developed during the school time could be change drastically according to the situation, for example, if a person developed a quality of not listening to other or we can become stubborn and he joins the company at the very lower level and he has no other option than he has to change his attitude and he has to listen and work according to the companies laws and the direction of his boss and if failed to do so, he could have lost his job also. So, we cannot say that influence of social groups will remain throughout life. But I would say that this case occurs very rarely.
In sum, as mentioned above we can that the human behavior is largely dependent on the social group along which they are associated, but in some case, there may be chance individual may not possess the same quality as of their group or they may have to change their habits or qualities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed to do so, he could have lost his job also. So, we cannot say that influence of so...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2509.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54528985507 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45612024315 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8395650148 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.388888889 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159433346532 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584197898609 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475856878287 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864134562224 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248798086434 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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