“‘It takes a village to raise a child’. The education or your children is the task of the community as a whole, not merely the province of teachers and local school administrators.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The education that children receive is crucial for their career and a variety of future endeavors. If the child gets poor quality of education, then it can prove to be detrimental for him. Therefore I mostly disagree with the statement that it should be the responsibility of the entire community to educate the children. This is because the child can be exposed to a surfeit of misleading incorrect information and they are never motivated to stop their education.
First, if the responsibility of education is rested on the society, then the children can get a lot of data and information from people who are not qualified or experienced like the teachers. Therefore the child may grow up believing these incorrect pieces of information to be true. For instance, if the community around the child teaches him that the earth is flat, then he may grow up thinking this fallacious piece of information as the truth. Also he may grow up to pass on this information to the next generation too. Thus resting the task of children's education on the inexperienced and barely knowledgeable elements of it can inculcate a large amount of faulty data in the malleable minds of the children.
Secondly, school or other educational institutions are formal settings where children attend classes, maintain discipline and learn to respect their teachers and the school administrators. This makes them value the education their receiving. As opposed to that is the task of educating them is bestowed on community, then it will promote an informal environment. This may cause them to disrespect education. For example, if a local person teaches the students Mathematics, those who find this subject tough may simply stop attending his lessons. This is not possible in a school where skipping classes is not all that easy. Also the final tests that determine the student's knowledge, push them into studying harder. Thus the responsibilty of education, when rested on schools and teachers have much better outcomes.
However, what we as a community can do is encourage our children, inculcate in them the importance of education and set good examples for them.
Thus, in conclusion, though a community can play a helping hand in the children's education, it should not be their responsibility to educate them. This task should be done only by experienced teachers and school administrators so that the children are exposed to authentic education and they do not lose interest in education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ious piece of information as the truth. Also he may grow up to pass on this informat...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1157635468 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99861749956 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5998598653 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.85 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16647734544 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566291765618 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440132463794 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104820896304 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308217153616 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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