"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because online instruction takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased. Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana University, we should initiate and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
While it may seem true that by initiating an online degree problems like those at omni Humana university will able to increase enrollment and solve budget problems, but there is lot of weakness in argument.
It is stated that number of student enorelled in oniline degree programs offered by Omni University is in increased by 50 percent, but the total increase in enrollment is not mentioned. There could be two students in online degree program in Omni past year, then a 50 percent increase means an increase of one person that will not make a significant difference.
Furthermore, there is no indication, how was the condition of dormitory and classroom in both the universities three years hence. Omni showed a significant decrease in expenditures of classrooms and dormitory over past year, maybe because they might have undergone renowation just one or two years ago. Hanuma university, one of the oldest universities, had not gone renowation from about last 20 years, which would have waxed the maintainance costs of buildinds.
Morever, fees received from students who are peursing online programms and offline programs is not known. Generally institue offers onilne programs at much cheaper price than offline programs . Profits received from online programs is much less than offline programs. So, increasing number pf students in online program might not increase revenues. To reduce maintanance cost, there should be complete renowation of buildings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
.... Morever, fees received from students who are peursing online programms and offline p...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...much cheaper price than offline programs . Profits received from online programs i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35064935065 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83912699483 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1845331151 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470276792694 0.243740707755 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158097636705 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107848516223 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247153723653 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110170848662 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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