Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places
Law has become an integral part of our lives. From attending school to working on jobs. Every public place has some laws for protection of the people. Flexibility in law encourages negligence and promotes a dangerous environment. Once people realize that they can manipulate laws to their advantage, flexibility behaves as an undue advantage to the powerful.
Basic agenda of setting up laws is protect the people from the horrors of human society and to make people feel safe. Flexibility ruins respect and power that the law can exercise. It hurts the reliability and faith which people have in law. If any road accident occurs between two people today, they both are patient enough not to indulge in a fight but to take up their cases to court and resolve the conflict. This faith is important because it makes people realize that they are not powerless and law can help them. But, law can lose its credibility when people of power try to manipulate it to their advantage.
As a part of society we are always told that law is there to protect us, but does it? In some cases law can be partial towards the people with power and increasing the flexibility of law to account for various situation can seriously damage the society. Many cases involves scenarios where the middle class people are continuously harassed by upper-class. Flexible laws can allows these upper classes to excercise limitless power.
Laws shouldn't be flexible for anyone or they should be flexible for everyone. Suppose a student actually reaches late to school because of his mendacity to afford transport. He gets scolded for being late and the flexibility in school timing is introduce many cases involves scenarios where the middle class people are on time also get an undue advantage to reach late to the school. Similarly there are many real life scenarios in which flexibility does more harm than benefiting the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'protected'.
Suggestion: protected
.... Basic agenda of setting up laws is protect the people from the horrors of human so...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ere to protect us, but does it? In some cases law can be partial towards the people w...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'involve'.
Suggestion: involve
...eriously damage the society. Many cases involves scenarios where the middle class peopl...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ases involves scenarios where the middle class people are continuously harassed b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r classes to excercise limitless power. Laws shouldnt be flexible for anyone or ...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...to excercise limitless power. Laws shouldnt be flexible for anyone or they should b...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to transport'
Suggestion: to transport
...hool because of his mendacity to afford transport. He gets scolded for being late and the...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
...and the flexibility in school timing is introduce many cases involves scenarios where the...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ases involves scenarios where the middle class people are on time also get an un...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arios where the middle class people are on time also get an undue advantage to r...
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Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... advantage to reach late to the school. Similarly there are many real life scenarios in w...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e harm than benefiting the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, similarly, so, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95031055901 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.563976359 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4369030081 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256829252886 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817706725216 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070986502818 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155048536462 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231341645848 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.