Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places
Law, by the definition, is that which are actually regulation and keep the system prosper and flourish. It is typically disputed that law should be firm in every situation regardless of flexible to take account of various circumstances, time and places. I disapprove of the basis of various circumstances, time and places, the law should be accountable for flexible enough. Firstly, I delineate some important issues of a firm law monitoring and secondly, how firm law helps to keep a system more sound.
First of all, the Law should be always treated equally. Although it is obvious that some crimes are not to be treated for every country on the basis of the same law but it is always equal for every individual country's people. For instance, if someone harasses a woman and raped, according to the Saudi Arab, they must be punished by the losing his head in front of people but other countries control this crime to punished by the jailor gibbet. furthermore, most important moto of the law is to control and maintain a proper system like all over the country in every industry follow the on system, if someone employee contact any wrongdoing, he or she must be fire out the company and this system not only for individual group of people behind to maintain all employee in the factory.
Secondly, rules and regulations always help to make a system sound and better. without the following regulation it would not possible to bring any success and would have possible to occurred system loss and various crimes. For instance, in Bangladesh for money transfer from one country to another not to follow the same regulation for general and government officers. as a result before some years, money laundering and various corruption getting higher by the government officer and country has suffered lots of economical bounds. and then after several years, Bangladesh change its money transferring policy and make a firm consideration for all peoples and able to control this corruption.
In conclusion, it is better to maintain firm law consideration for everyone and every sector to keep the system sound. But there are some people who prefer the flexibility of law of various circumstances, times and places. Personally, I believe that a good frim law only assures good prospective output.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02610966057 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76526575718 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485639686684 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2081271628 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259912455528 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112862773332 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150426786271 0.0758088955206 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183111594038 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151966923863 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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