Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
The assertion states that laws should be flexible and considerate of various circumstances, times, and places. I agree with the authors opinion to some extent, but we also have to consider that the law should not be too much flexible and tractable, if that happens it will be quite difficult, even impossible to apply these laws properly. There are some situations where the laws should be rigid.
Laws are fixed and rigid most of the time, and there is a very good reason for that. It helps to keep people especially the restive ones in line. People feel an apprehrension and intimidation that if they break laws then they will be punished for that. That's what maintains order and prevent chaos. If the laws were flexible and always being changed however anyone sees fit, people wouldn't feel this fear about breaking the law. There would be only chaos and tumult in the society, and no order. And that is even scary to think about.
However, I agree with the author that there are certain times and situations, when laws should be flexible, and if they aren't it could bring about the chaos the laws are there to prevent in the first place. It could even be cruel and inhumane in some cases. For example, let's think about a father taking his child to the hospital. The child is in serious condition. There is a possibilty that he will break one or two traffic laws while rushing to the hospital. Whatever the situation is, breaking a law is punishable, that's true, but if the judge and judy do not consider this kind of cases and even do not consider to lessen the punishment or fine, the person would loose his respect for the law and order. After all, the laws are there for the people, to ensure that the people are leading a good and peaceful life. So, if laws do not consider for this kinds of sensitive situations, people would loose respect for the laws and feel demured to follow the rules.
In conclusion, I'd like to say that laws should tough and rigid, it is necessary, to maintain order and to prevent the society from becoming tumultous and chaotic. But I do agree with the author that there are some circumstaces and times when the laws should be flexible in order to protect the very order they are there to protect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...es, times, and places. I agree with the authors opinion to some extent, but we also hav...
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...ws then they will be punished for that. Thats what maintains order and prevent chaos....
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...changed however anyone sees fit, people wouldnt feel this fear about breaking the law. ...
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...e are certain times and situations, when laws should be flexible, and if they are...
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...n laws should be flexible, and if they arent it could bring about the chaos the laws...
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...ation is, breaking a law is punishable, thats true, but if the judge and judy do not ...
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...ider this kind of cases and even do not consider to lessen the punishment or fine, the person woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58208955224 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31246569417 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455223880597 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3502004808 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347073803454 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116571848834 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125940280424 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252188792573 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123940087229 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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