Leaders are created primarily by the demands that are placed upon them. do you agree or disagree?
The author of the issue highlights that leaders have been created based on demands in any given society. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that leaders are created upon people's votes and they have been elected according to citizens' opinions. So, it is our demands that make the selection of leaders necessary in the society. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, leaders play an important role in any given society because human beings elected them to fulfill their demands. Broadly speaking, higher education, economic prosperity, cultural flourish and so forth, are main demands that are placed on leaders. So, these demands make the creation of leaders necessary owing to the fact that they are the inseparable part of any society. As a palpable example, a society needs to be flourishing, individuals need to continue their education and reach a tertiary education in a prominent academic setting, myriads of people are willing to run their own businesses and make more money. These are of utmost important demands that are placed on a leader and hardly can leaders make a progress without these demands because these tasks not only can help leaders assess their ability but also can satisfy people's needs. To elucidate more on this issue, leaders are created to fulfill people's demands and needs because they are skilled individuals which could come up with the best and wise decision in any realm.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that it is incumbent upon leaders to take the responsibility of the society because it is one of the most important demands in all around the world. If we take a minute to ponder over it, when a country is in crisis and is invaded by some other countries, leaders should keep track of a common ground to confront any threat successfully. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that it is the highest demand of people in critical situations due to the fact that being safe, privacy, security should be the first priorities of leaders, which are significant demands upon them.
However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, leaders should make their efforts and bend over backward to spread trustworthy and integrity in the society because it is the most required and admired the quality of all people. Indeed, the willingness and ability to trust people that you look is absolutely essential for you to perform at your very best. That being so, with trustworthy and integrity leaders have nothing to hide, so, they have nothing to fear, therefore, they will be able to perform their role successfully and meticulously. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...on a leader and hardly can leaders make a progress without these demands because these tas...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... However, what was alluded to above cant be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alo...
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Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...bility to trust people that you look is absolutely essential for you to perform at your very best. T...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2620.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99047619048 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7311230486 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491428571429 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4746085795 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216807262871 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647994115576 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536087270541 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105201519516 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653832016475 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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