Success can be defined as a combination of hardwork and luck.If one wants to succeed in life he/she requires both hardwork and luck. But hardwork plays a major role in determining ones success than luck does. Work ethics can be defined as a summation of hardwork, discipline towards work and punctuality. I disagree with the statement that Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethics does.As it is rightly said that Hardwork is the key to success.
Work ethics describes how honest and hard working someone is towards his/her work, For instance, In an computer programming job,If an employee doesnt perform well and submits erroneous code to the client , the client is bound to face issue while working with the application. Here the factor of work ethics called honesty comes into play, if the employee would have been honest toward his job and completed his work with efficiency he/she is bound to get success in the job.The second most important factor which determines success is hardwork, Working hard will always yield success,it may take sometime but at the end the ball will always be in your court.
For example,Sachin tendulkar was not born as a excellent cricketer, he gave his hardwork ,focus and dedication towards his profession and then only he could excel in his job. If he would have just be at home saying luck will play his role and i will be the best cricketer, then we wouldnt be knowing today a player sachin tendulkar. Another example, The winning six of mahendra singh dhoni, isnt a matter of luck, it is his hardwork, discipline towards his profession that made him the best caption of india and achieve success. It was his patience that made him achieve the label of caption cool Success doesnt come in a short period of time, it takes time, patience, hardwork, dedication and focus. It is necessary to work hard and give our completed dedication towards our work to achieve success.
But as i said above, success is a combination of luck and hardwork, our work ethics plays 99% role in our success but the 1% role is played by the luck, if that 1% is missing from our life, it is difficult to achieve success, It may happen sometimes that even after giving all the hardwork and dedication, we arent able to achieve what we desire, that is because we miss that 1% luck.
In conclusion, Not only luck but also work ethics both plays a major role in determining success, As one should follow the work ethics and leave the rest on the luck. As work ethics and luck are two sides of a same coin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69866071429 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50184826594 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459821428571 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5307628332 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.357142857 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486063440493 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222807663591 0.0831039109588 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193595109818 0.0758088955206 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32844058737 0.150359130593 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163306685806 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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