The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times. | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.

The given
statement contends that studying history is beneficial to compare the ancient
lifestyle<o:p></o:p>

of the people to
the people who are living in the current world. I agree with the given
assertion<o:p></o:p>

that go through
the history will dispel the illusions to the current way of thinking that
people<o:p></o:p>

are same as they
were in ancient. There are some satisfying arguments to the given proposition<o:p></o:p>

which make clear
that lifestyle has changed.<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

History reminds
of how the world was in ancient time. Studying history has the advantage that<o:p></o:p>

people can
understand the importance of the things like freedom, lifestyle,<o:p></o:p>

etc. History can
give gist of how the things were before. Studying history is reckless to some<o:p></o:p>

people who
thinks that what is the importance of it and why it is necessary to study them.
Some<o:p></o:p>

people thinks it
is beneficial in analysis as well as research area also.<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

History can give
the details that were novice to many people.<o:p></o:p>

Educating people
by including the history portion in their curriculum will definitely<o:p></o:p>

help them to
understand the ancient world. Some universities and educational institutions
are also<o:p></o:p>

offering various
types of courses worldwide for which students and professors are willing to<o:p></o:p>

make further
study and research. By studying the history many researches made the point that
<o:p></o:p>

knowledge about
history can be very effective and needed to the current living world. For
example, in<o:p></o:p>

the field of architecture there are some well-known
techniques in construction and designing field<o:p></o:p>

that were novice and most effective to the
current world. Places like<o:p></o:p>

Mohenjo Daro and
Hadappa are famous for their construction and architecture as well as
designing.<o:p></o:p>

Well known
architects are willing to study the structure and design of these places.
People also<o:p></o:p>

visits these
places to know about the history and ancient living.<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

In current world
people are living luxurious life who are wealthy and noble. Due to
technological<o:p></o:p>

advancements and
increasing the demand for luxurious items people are tending towards the<o:p></o:p>

unnecessary
items. Studying history makes to feel the comparison that how the world is
changed<o:p></o:p>

from basic need
of necessity to trend of buying unnecessary things. There are some regions on
this<o:p></o:p>

planet which are
still follows the ancient trends and beliefs. Scientists and some students who<o:p></o:p>

are doing thesis
on their history projects are willing to gain deep knowledge by visiting this<o:p></o:p>

places.<o:p></o:p>

In conclusion
with agreement to the given statement that studying history will dispel the
illusion<o:p></o:p>

of the current
living world to the ancient I believe that it is fair.<o:p></o:p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 27, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ce of the things like freedom, lifestyle,

^^
Line 37, column 52, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...al in analysis as well as research area also.

^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, of course, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5647.0 2235.4752809 253% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 11.4776422764 5.05705443957 227% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 15.2969692854 2.79657885939 547% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430894308943 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1378.8 704.065955056 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.59117977528 176% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.013096312 60.3974514979 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.9375 118.986275619 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.75 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 72.0 4.97078651685 1448% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0483119575886 0.243740707755 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442607412238 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365214506446 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387891214229 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066300380045 0.0667264976115 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 14.1392134831 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -60.49 48.8420337079 -124% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.2 12.1743820225 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 49.9 12.1639044944 410% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 11.8971910112 198% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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