Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
In general, I agree with the given assertion that educational institution should actively encourage their students in process of selection for further field of study for their lucrative future. In nowadays, those people who have lucrative lifestyle are considered to be richer and healthier. In current competitive world all people are chasing money and wealth to be rich and to show off.
In the given proposition it is said that educational institute should be effectively involved with the students to help them and to acknowledge them for their decision-making process for their future. Many people think that it is best to take their children towards the current trend of jobs. They ignore the factors that are affecting the future of their children. For example, some students follow the trend of demanding jobs and according to that they take their future decisions, which may sometimes result into the unsuccessful attempt for the carrier or their bright future.
Parents want that their children will become very successful and wealthy in matter of money and properties. This is the main reason that today also some people are trending towards the better planning for their children at the very young age. This mentality is resulted as the requirement that educational institution should actively involve as much as parents to the better lucrative future of the students.
Educational institution plays an important role in the future of students. Students are grown up in the ambience where everyone are in same competition. It also provides students to burnish their individual skills in a very proficient manner. Educational institution should be actively involved with the academics for each and every student. They should encourage them for the lucrative future compared to the unplanned future. They should conduct seminars on how to be wealthy and successful in current competitive world to withstand with the most competitive brains.
The main purpose for providing the encouragement and enthusiasm is to acknowledge the students and make aware them about the future opportunities as well as to show the importance for the need of wealthy and happy life. As in current scenarios also it is important to be happy and healthy due to the increasing stress and working hours for need of money. By providing the knowledge or the information about how the most successful people were became well known, what were they used to do with their living, how did they cleared milestones and became rich and wealthy, students will understand at the very young age to how to pursue their dreams.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that educational institutions should actively encourage their students to pursue the field of study in which they are chauvinist and become successful in lucrative manner. It benefits both, the students get their foot towards their bright future as well as educational institutions will get fame and more praise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... considered to be richer and healthier. In current competitive world all people ar...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd wealth to be rich and to show off. In the given proposition it is said that e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to show the importance for the need of wealthy and happy life. As in current sc...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... their foot towards their bright future as well as educational institutions will get fame ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22573839662 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79237959243 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419831223629 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9769930929 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.952380952 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435608419543 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14427354529 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128300029363 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266800657798 0.150359130593 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879193539028 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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