The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement

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The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Change and death is the only certain thing in our human lives. The prompt suggests that the main advantage to study history us to dismiss the proposition that the modern lifestyle is considerably different from the previous times. I strongly disagree with the statement and argue that there is a significant difference between the lifestyle of the people form modern and previous times and the study of history clearly shows this difference because of the following three reasons.

To begin with, technological advancement in recent times have made our contemporary lifestyle easier and convenient. Due to the influx of different technological inventions, now it possible to perform the tasks that were deemed impossible in the recent past. For instance, the idea of a video conference will be absurd in an era where there was not even a telephone. Comparison of the previous era and saying that life in those times is no different than it is today is not prudent. Now people can travel from one end of the world to another in a relatively short amount of time, previously it was impossible before the invention of ships and boats, then it was kind of possible but used to take a lot of time. The after series of advancements in ship technology and the invention of the airplane, the travel time was reduced. So, as we can see that, there is always the possibility of further advancement and the situation is changing day by day, we can argue that the lives of the future generation will also be different. We can even see the difference in a short amount of time. For instance, take world war one and world war two. Even though they were spaced around only 2 decades, the advancement in the military and warfare makes the war different. For example, in world war one there were no tanks or aircraft, but in world war two there was a heavy influx of aircraft and tanks. Therefore, due to the huge advancement in the field of technology, the lives of the people are considerably different from what it used to be.

Moreover, advancement is in the field of medicine is also important. Before people used to die because of diseases like tuberculosis, dengue, etc which now seems absurd, as the treatment of those diseases has become commonplace. Different viruses have been eradicated, complex drugs have been formulated for the once life-threatening dangerous diseases. We can only imagine the lifestyle of the people in previous times where there was an epidemic of the diseases everywhere, people constantly living in the fear of dying the next day. Now the situation is completely different, and it is changing rapidly, we can hope that the diseases that are troubling us today like AIDS, Ebola will be eradicated someday, and lives of that generation will be different from what it is now. So, because of the constant research and advancement in the medical field, we have managed to get rid of some dangerous diseases of the previous times where it used to cause disturbance to the huge population, the life of the people living in this generation has become better at least in the field of medicine.

Finally, there is the evolution of the people. People have now become more global than ever before. The language has evolved and changed. The English form the 18th century is far different from the English from today. The people from 18th century England will not understand the people from present-day England and vice versa. There is the evolution of plants and animals also. Some have gone extinct and some new have been discovered. Similarly, the geography also changes with time. The region once covered with ice is a desert now, and where there was dessert now dense forest. So, with all these changes it can be said with confidence the lifestyle of the people will also be different.

However, one can argue that people are the same even though the environment has changed. The society still discriminates people based on class. Poverty is still going on. The wars are still being fought. People have the same desire and greed. But I think these above-mentioned issues are inherent in human life and cannot be completely changed even in the future and think they are trivial as compared to other huge changes in the society as mentioned in previous paragraphs.

In the final analysis, I think that the lifestyle and people are evolving day by day, people will be different in different generations with varying qualities and the study of history regularly shows this evolution.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...hat life in those times is no different than it is today is not prudent. Now people ...
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Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... different from the English from today. The people from 18th century England will n...
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Line 13, column 373, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... is the evolution of plants and animals also. Some have gone extinct and some new ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 19.5258426966 246% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3749.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 766.0 442.535393258 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89425587467 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.26086542369 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70212061186 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.403394255875 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1213.2 704.065955056 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1220177775 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6578947368 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215082502905 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517150995457 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546891522139 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133978326123 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503917705173 0.0667264976115 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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