Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
In the heyday period of the technology especially media & the internet a news in the world can be easily reach out to people who are not in close with that incident. Though it seems inflammatory that whether it can ruin the actual value of information. However, in perceptive view it reveals that by juxtaposing so many events news people's judgmental ability will surely be augmented rather being exacerbated. In fact, the whole social and showbiz media open up the gate to absorb profuse amount of information at the same time thus people can compare among the information's value which is really a positive sign.
First of all, if the information is not easily available then people have to concentrate on one information & by this the other things happening on the other part of the world will not be easily noticed. Moreover, there will be always a scope to evoke people mind with one issue & in cover of that issue other controversial task can easily be implicated. This exact same thing happened during the second world war when the all of the world people's were focused on the German issue that whether they could win the war against Russia or not. In that exact period , America was building the Atom bomb which people were unaware of because they were busy with the German issue. However, when America implicated the Atom bomb on japan all the people of the world became stunted because they even didn't think of that. Hence, this is the problem with focusing on one side of information.
In contrast with the lat example, it can be easily exempted that the cardinal effect of combining so many information from the present states of Middle east. The western countries are try to evoke people with other information but thorough Social media like Facebook, Twitter & other things the worlds people can know the actual scenario. In fact, some of the country decry against the war happening on Palestine though the besides country Israel always said there was no war & they did nothing. But the people of the world can judge through the video proof which is leaked by the Palestine's people. Again this is the major impact of available so many information.
Finally, it is tempting to credit that people attention on one event getting shorter with this surfeit of the data news among the virtual world. However, in wide view it have a overall good impact. Because people like in Bangladesh who are quite unaware about what happening on the world is now able to know every information of the world. Like Bangladeshi students in early days only went in USA and Uk for higher study as they didnot know that some other country has good university. But nowadays they went among varieties of the country of the world bacuse of the available information.
In recapitulation, the statement is the verisimilitude of the exact scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...chnology especially media & the internet a news in the world can be easily reach ...
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...nology especially media & the internet a news in the world can be easily reach out to...
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... it reveals that by juxtaposing so many events news peoples judgmental ability will su...
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...ed during the second world war when the all of the world peoples were focused on the Germa...
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...inst Russia or not. In that exact period , America was building the Atom bomb whic...
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... world became stunted because they even didnt think of that. Hence, this is the prob...
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...stunted because they even didnt think of that. Hence, this is the problem with fo...
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...ing on one side of information. In contrast with the lat example, it can be easily ...
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Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...hat the cardinal effect of combining so many information from the present states of Middle east....
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...can know the actual scenario. In fact, some of the country decry against the war happening...
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...he war happening on Palestine though the besides country Israel always said there...
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...his is the major impact of available so many information. Finally, it is tempti...
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...his is the major impact of available so many information. Finally, it is tempting to credit...
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... Finally, it is tempting to credit that people attention on one event getting sh...
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...virtual world. However, in wide view it have a overall good impact. Because people l...
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...al world. However, in wide view it have a overall good impact. Because people lik...
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... people like in Bangladesh who are quite unaware about what happening on the worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, thus, in contrast, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87216494845 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53294337832 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474226804124 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0457399857 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.523809524 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0952380952 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213760964156 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672355219686 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423437774346 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108919937996 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573312505797 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.