Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
Churning out the most important part from the deluge of information will be better in today's era. Just knowing the crux of the information from the different parts of the world will really help the people to solve variegated issues in a society. Though the populace attention towards a specific information is getting shorter, perusing a particular news to get all the details can help the populace to increase the knowledge about a specific area or a field. Meticulous examination of an information can also enhance the capability of the person to envision eclectic solutions to the common problems faced by a community, for instance, pollution.
The internet is a rich source to get information on any topic. The gamut of topics can widely range from a research study to details about how to create a delicious dish. There can be multiple articles about the same topic written by the renowned authors, who are not just popular in their field of study but also active and always willing to publish their findings. Therefore, a person having a busy schedule will be most benefitted if they can quickly know the most essential part of information. Synopsis of the news makes it easier for the news reader to only focus on the big picture about the whole story, which not only saves their time but also let the readers to jump to another news.
However, going deeper into an article in some cases can become really important. For instance, during the pandemic of COVID-19 (Corona Virus Disease- 2019), knowing about all the specific details about the virus has also saved millions of lives around the globe. WHO has posted important guidelines about how to tackle the symptoms of the COVID-19 disease, and therefore, every news channel was stressing the fact that the general public must know all the ways to fight with the disease. The government also launched which educated the public about the hygiene from sanitising their hands to wearing masks while going out of the house. All these specific details have really helped the people to stop the spread of virus to a great extent, thereby saving the human lives.
The time is progressing towards the faster development of the community. Therefore, societies leading the world must know what is happening all around them, and it is only possible when people will have a basic idea about the conditions in which they are living. On the other hand, some situations also requires the populace to know everything from end-to-end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'particular news'.
Suggestion: particular news
...nformation is getting shorter, perusing a particular news to get all the details can help the pop...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...channel was stressing the fact that the general public must know all the ways to fight with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, in some cases, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92840095465 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5100228565 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4568060162 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.470588235 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937286328453 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031204270994 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265256336728 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595666957955 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128091914821 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.