Men and women, because of inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Women and men have inherent physical differences based on hormonal balances, capacity to build muscle, and child-bearing. This effects the type of physical tasks to which each gender typically is suited. However, historical social relationships between the sexes has reinforced stereotypes that exagerate the level of these differences. The claim made specifies "many tasks" and it should be noted that this pertains to physical differences only, not intellectual capacity.
In the days of hunter-gatherers, when infant mortality was high, females spent much of their adult lives being pregnant. The more children a woman bore, the more that might grow to adulthood and further the family proliferation. During these early times, a woman might be pregnant for all but a few months of her adult life. Thus, the males of the household naturally managed tasks that required lifting, running, physical exhertion, or traveling far from home. This is the basis for many assumptions based on gender differences, although a woman without child might have been able to complete the same activities.
Modern science has overturned many cultural stereotypes about the capacities of men and women, and this is reflected in expectations for each gender. In the last 15 years, the US Air Force has altered the components of their physical fitness exam. Women and men are now expected to complete the same amount of push-ups, and cardio fitness is scored on the same scale. Despite knowledge that both sexes have equal aptitude in many activities, however, historical infrastructure continues to create a divide. For example, US submarines were designed for only one gender, and to update the internal design to allow female seamen to cohabitat is a costly and time-consuming affair. Thus the US Navy and marines have delayed the determination that female and male servicemen can perform the same roles.
Physical differences in the past were considered to include mental and emotional capacity of the human brain. However, this can be traced to the historic role of the woman as child-bearer, meaning that she was occupied with this activity while men were more likely outside the home taking leadership positions in the community. She obtained the stereotype of "nurturer" and it was assumed the female brain is more geared toward emotions than logic-based activities.
Women and men are different, but not to the extent that social history would have us believe. As society and science continues to evolve, we may see these differences fade away completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74871794872 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61644283476 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 130.0 23.0359550562 564% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 412.301669493 60.3974514979 683% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 747.333333333 118.986275619 628% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 130.0 23.4991977007 553% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180056652884 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132142138826 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443981234947 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995915059317 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486277661353 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 70.7 14.1392134831 500% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -77.39 48.8420337079 -158% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 24.5 7.92365168539 309% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 56.3 12.1743820225 462% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.1639044944 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.55 8.38706741573 185% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 11.8971910112 277% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 54.0 11.2143820225 482% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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