Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Men and women have long argued over the fact that there should be equal distribution of both genders at any particual field of work. Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks that occur around the world. I agree with this statement and I put forward my reasoning for the same in the paragraphs below.
The physical structure of women, that has been created by god, enables them to be the carrier of an infant. Women are the ones who get impregnated after two indivduals of the opposite sex mate. Owing to this, a women has to take a leave of absence from the workplace where she is employed in. In popular terms, a "maternal leave". Due to which, a task that was given to the woman may be incomplete and the company has to find someone on a temporary basis to fill in the gap. The problem in such a scenario is that it becomes very difficult to find a person who would work on a temporary basis and then relinquish his or her position when the worker returns from her maternal leave. This is the reason why we currently see an inbalance in the number of male and female workers in co-orperate sectors. The idea of maternal leave does not play well on the minds of an employer since it results in a disturbance of normal flow of work.
Sports is highly competetive and a physically taxing form of work. We often see men going through painstalking ways of getting their body into shape, increase their stamina and build up their core strength. Such a routine needs an uninterrupted dicipline wherein the athlete would not take a single day-off from exercising. This helps the athlete get the desired results on the day when a game is played. Such a regime is tad difficult for a women to follow. Firstly, if a woman gets preagnent, it becomes really tiring for them to firstly go through the whole phase of pregnancy and secondly, it is even more difficult to get back in shape. Such an event is rare. Something that is not rare is the menstrual cycle of a woman. It occurs every month, wherein the women bleed and go through an immense amount of pain. This inhibits their daily routine to perform physical activities. Moreover, if such a phase occurs during a particular match day, it is almost impossible for them to play.
Wars are situations wherein only the bravest of men are sent to to fight for a nation. Do not get me wrong that women are not brave. History proves that women have led army's into war and have come back victorious. But the present scenario makes it difficult owing to the sheer stress a war puts, onto the minds and body of an individual. In previous times, warriors, men and women alike were trained form their fledgling years. This meant that both the genders were equally capable of going to war. Such is not the case currently and only after a person finishes his formal education he or she can enlist in the army. The physical requiremnts are therefore too taxing for a woman's body to endure. Hence, it becomes an ideal choice to enlist men in the army.
In sum, there are instances wherein a women could possibly be on par with men for a particula task that is present. But the current scenario, and the growing needs of a few certain sectors of work make it impossible for women to qualify. Hence, I agree with the staement that men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks that occur around the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...f the opposite sex mate. Owing to this, a women has to take a leave of absence from the...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...the opposite sex mate. Owing to this, a women has to take a leave of absence from the...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e she is employed in. In popular terms, a 'maternal leave'. Due to whic...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...yed. Such a regime is tad difficult for a women to follow. Firstly, if a woman gets pre...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...d. Such a regime is tad difficult for a women to follow. Firstly, if a woman gets pre...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...herein only the bravest of men are sent to to fight for a nation. Do not get me wrong...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
... In sum, there are instances wherein a women could possibly be on par with men for a...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
... In sum, there are instances wherein a women could possibly be on par with men for a...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...um, there are instances wherein a women could possibly be on par with men for a particula task...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2847.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 623.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56982343499 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47573654769 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481540930979 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 900.9 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5898959533 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7352941176 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3235294118 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08823529412 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228114668549 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569117889917 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079463280456 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161974820799 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101470313258 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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