Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is always said that behind every successful man, there is a strong woman. Yet, when it comes to male-female equality, things seem to differ. The prompt suggests due to the inherent physical differences of men and women, they are not equally suited for many tasks. Since the beginning of the time, any human community is always dominated by men. It is an unwritten rule that the man will do the work to feed his family and woman shall bear his children and do the household chores. No matter how sexist this sounds, this mentality is still preserved in many parts of the world.
Men are always considered as strong pillars who work harder to earn pride for themselves and their family. A man with huge masculine physique, is supposed to face all the problems which come before him and his family, and woman shall always stand by his side in all situations. Many traditions and cultures throughout the globe have been blindly following this stereotype for generations. Women are always considered as weak assets of the society.
While this is true, but we must agree that women have extreme mental strength than men. Though they are considered as physically weak, their mental strength and dedication always stands out when compared to a man. For example, Kalpana Chawla, the First Indian Woman to go in space, must have gone through the rigorous training; thereby meeting both physical and mental strength requirements, just like a man.
In addition to this, many countries have started to enroll women in their armies. It is obvious that one must be arduous to be serving for their country and the fact that women are willingly stepping forward for such roles is astonishing. This not only undermines the assertion, but also corroborates the fact that many women can outclass men in terms of both physical and mental challenges.
Moreover, many women have been a part of revolution of women empowerment for many generations.Late Mrs. Savitri bai Phule, was first educated Indian woman, and she had to go through a lot of hatred and shame to achieve this simple task. But with dedication and perseverence, she became an exemplar for many generations of women to follow. Also, Late Dr. Mrs. Anandi Gopal was first Indian woman to become a doctor, and she too, had to follow a tough path to reach to her destination. This elucidates the fact that women always had to fight with extreme hardwork and diligence to reach to the position they have today.
In conclusion, inherent physical differences is not a correct measure to check the suitability of men or women for a particular task. Women always face a little bias when it comes to the selection between a man or a woman, which is not encouraging. If given a proper opportunity, women have more chances to succeed than a man because of their inherent diligence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Late
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85921325052 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62728432548 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511387163561 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8575636742 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.88 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224780442917 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682447536792 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614149201538 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127917857718 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435422101225 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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