Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The topic of equality between men and women is not novel. It has been a "hot topic of debate for the longest time now. The prompt suggests men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical differences. I strongly disagree with this because of two reasons.
Firstly, it is sexist to say men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their physical differences. Are there really tasks, activities, or jobs men engage in that women can't or haven't? The answer is NO. Let's consider a physically demanding activity such as sports. Over the years, women have proven to be a force to be reckoned with in the world of sports. Women play football, soccer, tennis, basketball, hockey, cricket, just to mention but a few. In fact, some of the world's most renowned and highest paid sportsmen are women! A good example of this are Venus and Serena Williams. They are undisputably two of the greatest tennis players in the history of tennis. Between them they have scores of GrandSlam titles and many other top accolades. Interestingly, the U.S. women's tennis team (doubles) have won more Olympic gold medals than the male tennis team (doubles). So what are we really talking about here? Arguing that women can't equally perform at the same level of men because of physical differences is tantamount to sexism.
Furthermore, women excel in other physically demanding fields such as boxing, wrestling, karate, and so on. That is to say, there is no type of physical quality such as strength or height men possess that women don't. Basketball players are known to be usually 6ft tall and above, guess what? There are 6ft tall basketball female players too! Women are firefighters, lumberjacks; and so engage in so many physically demanding
tasks. According to a survey, there are millions of women in the military across the globe.
Therefore, the argument that men and women are not equally suited for the same tasks is untrue, and worse, provocative. Most people who believe women cannot equally perform as men mostly base their reasons on physical strength, and with the examples stated above, we can see why that conclusion is based on faulty reasoning. In conclusion, women can equally and even perform better than men in any tasks regardless of physical differences. After all, what a man can do, a woman can do better!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...men and women is not novel. It has been a 'hot topic of debate for the longe...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ities, or jobs men engage in that women cant or havent? The answer is NO. Lets consi...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...r jobs men engage in that women cant or havent? The answer is NO. Lets consider a phys...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...women cant or havent? The answer is NO. Lets consider a physically demanding activit...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...et, just to mention but a few. In fact, some of the worlds most renowned and highest paid s...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... talking about here? Arguing that women cant equally perform at the same level of me...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rength or height men possess that women dont. Basketball players are known to be usu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, after all, in conclusion, in fact, such as, talking about, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91293532338 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55779582786 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0452362327 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.08 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275672950835 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818486517953 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886103848656 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156204246661 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088578780075 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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