In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
There is an opinion that in any profession imagination is more important than knowledge and I fully agree with this opinion. Certainly knowledge is a support for any kind of activity. You can't go far without knowledge. The professional of the business is first of all the person who is well knowing the business and understanding its subtleties. However, it is imagination that helps a person to go beyond the limits of existing knowledge, to make discoveries, and to create a masterpiece.
First of all, considering the sphere of fundamental Sciences, such as physics or chemistry, it can be noted that there are many people who perform routine, but important and necessary for mankind work. However, only a rich imagination helps to make discoveries and, therefore, to develop science. For example, without deep knowledge in the field of fundamental physics, Einstein could not see the existing problem of relativity of time and speed, but only imagination helped him to put forward a completely fantastic theory of relativity, which changed the vector of development of physical science. A similar story happened with Mendeleev, who carefully studying and looking for the relationship between chemical elements, with the help of his rich imagination was able to see and depict the table of chemical elements. It is impossible not to note the contribution that this discovery has brought to the development of all world science and technology.
It may seem that in some professions, such as accounting or Finance imagination is not necessary absolutely, and most importantly knowledge. However, in my opinion, such a developed world economic system could not exist at all, without a rich human imagination. Perhaps once it was obvious to exchange goods for goods, and then it became a logical decision to introduce a gold equivalent to the goods. But to create stocks, futures, stock exchanges, liens, options and in General to create such a complex working economic system could only rich human imagination.
Speaking about the importance of imagination, it is impossible not to touch the sphere of arts. It seems to me that this is the area of our lives in which we can sometimes do without knowledge at all. Of course, most composers and artists received classical education and knew the laws of composition or musical notation before they created their masterpieces. However, there are many examples of great self-taught artists. Henri Rousseau is one of the most famous representatives of primitivism in painting. And the lack of art education helped him to create his own, unique, world-famous technique. Not only a rich imagination, but also the lack of basic education helped to see the world in a new way.
In any field and sphere of life knowledge is extremely important, but only imagination changes our world for the better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in general, kind of, of course, speaking about, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15766738661 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03257431197 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509719222462 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0584193887 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0454545455 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162702786985 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475461825489 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707414540824 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906758874547 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604884141451 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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