In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
"A journey of thousand miles begins with a single step", with each step man has acquired knowledge about the ways of nature, chemistry, geometry, arithmetic, biology, music, physics, communication, literature, banking, astronomy, etc. Since ancient times, man has made remarkable advancement in the field of inventions. From commuting by foot to the invention of bullet trains man has done a commendable job innovating his life. Today we're using devices and services we never even imagined. Who would've imagined communicating with one another from a continent away would be made possible.
I disagree that in most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge. For instance, A person can imagine making a jetpack, but the prerequisite for making a jetpack is the knowledge of laws of physics, thrust, engineering, and mathematics. Just imagining yourself in the sky with a jetpack won't help you build it. Acquiring knowledge is what survival in the world has been all about. The lessons that our ancestors learned were passed on to us in the form of books, engravings, paintings, etc. The learned engineers, like Nicholas Tesla, Physicists like Issac Newton, Mathematicians like G.H. Hardy, writers like Shakespeare and many more have contributed to our education systems which were made to make us aware of the workings of the universe. Knowledge broadens one's horizons. From an early age, we are put into institutions like schools to grasp knowledge about the world and its elements. Knowledge gives our imagination wings. There's no doubt that new ideas originate from one's imagination, but knowledge is the tool to implement it in life. Everybody must have Imagined about making long-distance communication easier, but it was not the imagination which led to the life-altering discovery of telephones. It was the knowledge and hard work of Alexander Graham Bell which made this dream of thousands of people come true.
In conclusion, Knowledge is what makes a man skilled. A powerful imagination with necessary knowledge has made the world what it is today. imagination is the engine, fueled by knowledge. Without knowledge, we're just a group of people daydreaming about stuff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36857142857 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03840586559 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2127616901 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4761904762 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194358005392 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074214780254 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192037404412 0.0758088955206 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117525670586 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779457944827 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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