In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important knowledge.
when people are arguing about that imagination is more important than knowlege in most cases, it's clear it really depends on specific situations from diverse circumstances. Although in some special subjects such as art, imagination indeed more inportant knowledge, things positioing in most cases like in the aspects of medical science and ecology, the knowledge is more imprtant.
Firstly, in the area of fine art, imagination can be quite important when comparing with the role of knowledge. Take the precurser of the Post-impressionism who named Van Gough, for example. He used his unique thoughts to make masterpieces of paintings, like wheat field, that mostly gave the viewers a sense of emotional and his feelings at that time. As results, collectors tend to pay enormous of money to buy his works. His impressive achievement came from his crucial imagination, while his knowledge seemed not very important at this time for making paintings.
Secondly, specialists in medical science need to pay more attentions on what they have learnt instead of what they have imaginated. that is to say, their researches are based on the information in their textbooks and it could be potentially harmful for the results conducted from a purly imagined process. The case of Youyou Tu can be perfectly make an illustration. She used her knowledge to make research and experiment to invente new medicine that can be treated as a kind of effective drug to fight against malaria. Her cure-all has saved countless of people around the world.
Thirdly, scientists from the filed of ecology can be another concrete points in this issue. Ecologists need to collect and study the data that were collected all over the planet to make analysis and conclusions. in the organization of WWF which is world Wildlife Fund, people need to use their knowledge learnt from varied fields to pretent phenomenon and make strong arugument to encourage people save wild animals. If they only adopt their imaginations to do such work, their conclusions and argument might not seem very convincing and persuasive for the most audiences.
To sum up, from the above analysis about the arguments that speperately discuss the situations in art, medical science and ecology, it's convincing that In some professions and academic fields, imagination is indeed more important knowledge, while in most cases, knowledge is more crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, kind of, such as, in most cases, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23575129534 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88395034431 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7726839076 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.882352941 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274712507281 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740284555711 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114183434306 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180746827138 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155873738133 0.0667264976115 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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