There is a famous quote said by a famous someone, we all are bound by nothing but our imagination. According to prompt imagination is more important than knowledge in many feilds. While knowledge is surely important to achieve things, but most of the great things we have today were once only imagined by someone. I mostly agree with the prompt for the following reasons.
There must have been a time when people imagined flying. They would watch these magnificient birds, spreading their wings and imagine themselves in those birds’ place. This imagination became a goal for some people, who later invented air planes. No one had any knowledge about flying. But because for their imagination they studied about these things. If people didnt’ dream about flying, no one would have even tried building the planes. While knowledge was important in this invention, but people gathered that knowledge when they dreamt about flying.
Similarly people wanted to stay in touch with each other even when they were not with each other. So some people imagined about a world with faster communication. Next step was to study about faster communication. At last, after so many unsuccessful attempts, sleepless nights, telephones were created.
If someone has knowledge about everything, but does not know how to use that knowledge, then it is wasted. This use is given to us by our imaginations and dreams. Their were things which once were considered magical, but now are true because some people wanted those things so much that they gathered knowledge about those things, and then used that knowledge to fullfill those dreams. Imagination is our goal, and knowledge is a tool to achieve those goals.
This does not make knowldge completely useless. We need knowldge to know our limits and how to expand those limits. We need knowledge to know the pros and cos of our imagination. Some years back living in mars was just our imagination, which today seems possible because of the increase in knowledge about the red planet. Imagining alone would not lead to any result. But a will to make those imaginations true by gaining knowledge will be a step in the right direction.
Hence both imagination and knowledge alone are useless. We need knowldege to achieve or imagination and we need imagination to use our knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, similarly, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03116883117 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63246464931 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483116883117 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8910067834 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7407407407 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2592592593 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81481481481 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152161616118 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479150271202 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453134337211 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887640685928 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510420747177 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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