Nation should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

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Nation should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

The statement states that government and people of the country should make efforts to preserve the remaining wildlife in their natural state. Wildlife is very important part of the ecosystem and plays important role in maintaining the balance in the ecosystem.

Nation should work by making the area reserved where the animals and wildlife which are endangered. The nearby areas should restrained from any sort of the residential and industrial areas. Efforts should be made to cover the sanctuary area by the forest police so that no hunter enter the forest premises. The goverment should take care of the animals by conducting the census of the animals periodically. So that they can know about the increase or decline in the numbers of the particular species.

People should be alert so that by any means they don't support the people who are hunting the animals in the forest. And inform the government if any illegal activities are found nearby. The special programs should be conducted by the forest department for educating the villagers and enligthening them with importance of the forest and wildlife conservation. As day by day forest cover is decreasing, this can be harmful for the villages near to the forest area as wild animals might come to villages unknowingly and may harm the people.

The species should be bifurcated in to the different types such as endangered , extinct, etc. This idea would be helpful to them in making the policies for the conservation of the wildlife. The laws designed by the lawmakers should be strict enough to restrict any person to not follow it. Full measures should be taken that the laws are followed and implemented.Government should make the departments for the conservation of the wildlife and make recruitment and posting for the ardent people near by the areas of the forest. And vigilance should be kept on them. Government should also support various Non-governmental organizations and institutions working in this direction with both monetary and ideologically.

There are many species of animals and birds now day not seen might be extinct so research work should be conducted on reasons for their extinct, by doing that might be we able to save other species from getting extinct.

Hence,it is completely correct and laws should be made to preserve the wildlife and forest because of they are the important part of the universe and important for maintaining the balance in the world. There should be no laziness in making of the laws and it should be in such a way that no one dares to overrule it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, then, sort of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00934579439 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84321136764 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448598130841 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0752184219 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23345065386 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825521431866 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772427113825 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131315517954 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579783077998 0.0667264976115 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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