People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
the statement states that the people who make choices or decisions based on emotions and justify those decisions with the logic are poor decision makers. people doing such things might be taking wrong or unjustified decisions many times.Because they are judging before before thinking it with mind.
humans with such a practice tend to get fooled many times as people try to take advantages of them by creating such a situations and getting what they want from them. this could be disastrous when a person at high position in big organization having many people dependent on his decisions does this kind pf deed. For example chairperson of the company like Amazon has to take decision about employing drones for the delivery of the items to their customers. If a person taking emotionally then he would tend to take decision of declining the drone idea as it may lead to the job of many people and making them jobless. but a person with the logical thinking doesn't take decisions this way as he thinks of company development and take decision to replace humans with drones and fasten the delivery for its customers.
thinking rationally and taking decisions will always be wise and prudent as people in corporate always prefer wise thinking rather than emotional as there is a cut through among the companies. While thinking about statement in the political sense it advisable to give look once to it emotionally as sometimes not thinking emotionally can result in losing the power of the state. For example Donald Trump taking decisions emotionally about the american thinking it to well for the native american and imposing duties on the countries like china is emotional and later onward supporting it with his idea and upholding decision.
humans and robots have one difference that humans can think emotionally and robots can't think. sometimes in some situations it is good idea to do it that ways. but doing it in every such situations would be foolishness. Suppose deciding whether to leave poor child found doing robbery thinking on it emotionally everyone will like to leave and with logic think we should not help him and rather send him to child care centers and report to cops.
Hence, making decisions emotionally can be right and wrong depending on many of factors such as what sector person is working, what level of decision he taking and many others.I agree that taking decisions emotionally and relating with logic is not always a good idea and not leading to good decision ability. doing it depending upon situation is always wise other wise it can be poor decision making ability of the person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54337789454 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463800904977 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3482130273 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0625 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410900300015 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157285301792 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194128402529 0.0758088955206 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280348183539 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187125291357 0.0667264976115 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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