A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The claim recommends that all the students in a country should study the same national curriculum. this recommendation is hard to impliment but it will benefit many of the students in the country. I agree with the recommendation as it will help to provide equal access and opportunities to every student for further studies. Here, I have analyzed some of the benefits of having a uniform curriculum and circumstance that may be a reason to reevaluate the recommendation.

Firstly, a homogenous education will give all the students a equal platform to apply to competitive colleges throughout the country. many nations have some top colleges that require a certain level of ability to be admitted into. some schools provide traning for these ability more than others, which makes the students from the former school have an upper hand on the admissions. The uniformity in the education students recieve the admission process can be purely based on the students' ability and not their background, and hence have unbaised results.

Secondly, having a uniform curriculum throuoghout the nation would benefit the students that have to transfer multiple times due to various reasons. students that have family issue or have parents that recieve transfers very frequently, usually suffer from lack of quality and consistent education. having a uniform curriculum would make it very easy for the transferring student to adapt to the new place and will not hinder their education at all. this will further benefit the students as they will be able to show their potential and have equal opportunites.

Lastly, education is a right and having equal access to it is extremly important. every student in the nation has a right to recieve quality education, no matter what race, class, sex or ethnicity they belong to. having an uniform education system will make sure that all the students are recieving a high quality education and no social factors are affecting its access to the students. Better access to quality education will again benefits all the students of all groups to recieve equal opportunity for higher education and in job market, which eventually benefits the group as a whole.

this recommendation will not hold true in a situation where the students are able to access education of international level and benefit from it or they would like be competitive for admissions in universities abroad. this mainly applies to students who can afford to recieve a higher quality education than the national curriculum such as internation Bacculaurate (ib) and Advanced Placement (ap). these students will be derived of such education if this recommendation is applied. Furthermore, the students who want to study abroad and want to be competitive on an international level curriculums such as ib and ap makes the student more capable of recieving the education.

Overall, both the benefits and the circumstance contradicting the recommendation I would still stand with my position to follow the recommendation, however, I think there should be some flexibility for students who want to recieve a different type of education for numerous reasons.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, i think, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2674.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28458498024 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9807121847 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432806324111 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 853.2 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0606193182 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0952380952 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197198857722 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789815556964 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063040643003 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126293666418 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483492987722 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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