A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education is the most integral part of a person's development. It serves as a building block in shaping a student's destiny. However, it is unwarranted to say that a nation should mandate all its students to go through the same national curriculum till the time they enter college. Although, study at the same level till high school for all the students is mandatory, but it should be optional, or rather depends on an individual choice like what they want to study after their high school. Students should have rights to choose the subjects which inspires or motivates them.
First of all, taking the subjects of their interest will guide them further in their life with what they actually want to become in future. As they will take more interest in in the particular subject, because they chose it , and not took it under any compulsion, and hence students are going to dig deeper into the subject matter. They will understand the beforehand, even before they are going to learn about it in their class, all due to enthusiasm for the area of interest. Albeit, this won't stop here, this trend will welcome new and creative ideas from the students, and further help their nation in some way or the other.
Furthermore, this strategy also has numerous advantages when it comes to knowledge factor. For example: the group that is going to most benefitted from this idea is the juniors of these students as they will get to know about various fields which they always dream about, but due to lack of awraeness, they were not aware of the subjects that could really support their ideas. In contrst to this, senior year school students can also use help of their seniors in terms of future subjects relating their field before even the entrance test for a college, and it will give them a better insight about which college they should choose to pursue their dream in order to get what they want.
The another advantage is cost factor. If the students study the same course, then this situation will definately going to support those students who lacks fund during their school times. As, they can get the old books from their seniors and without spending much can continue their studies atleast uptill they graduate from senior year. However, this strategy also going to bolster those individuals who want to study science subjects after high school, but are not able to fund the cost of study material, as it is a fact that science books are really comes with high prices. So,that it could help them further while entering college, and eventually they will be at that stage with a clear mind to think, and enhance their career options.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ducation is the most integral part of a persons development. It serves as a building bl...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...serves as a building block in shaping a students destiny. However, it is unwarranted to ...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... with what they actually want to become in future. As they will take more interest in in ...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...future. As they will take more interest in in the particular subject, because they ch...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...articular subject, because they chose it , and not took it under any compulsion, a...
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Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...ks are really comes with high prices. So,that it could help them further while enteri...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205179282869 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.157370517928 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0697211155378 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537848605578 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0856573705179 0.0444667217837 193% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121513944223 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0239043824701 0.0406280797675 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.26810078969 2.79330140395 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398406374502 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.093625498008 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338645418327 0.0249443105267 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219123505976 0.0148568991511 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2631.0 2732.02544248 96% => OK
No of words: 458.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74454148472 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312227074236 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229257641921 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146288209607 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0589519650655 0.132149295362 45% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.26810078969 2.79330140395 81% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.165368241 55.4138127331 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9411764706 23.380412469 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9657640808 59.4972553346 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.764705882 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9411764706 23.380412469 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.674092028746 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 49.8669406627 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.18120805369 1.64882698954 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429098375146 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0988595504827 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822875391875 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522204869626 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172778103419 0.149214159877 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184793742409 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896013494323 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444770550658 0.385218514788 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0726273726493 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326811743183 0.275328986314 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648892050867 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum three arguments wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.