A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
This topic raises the widely debated issue of uniform education norms across a nation. Admittedly, by having a common curriculum, the college faculties have a clear understanding of the depth of each topic studied by the student prior to college education. This helps in administering the course with equal effectiveness throughout the batch of students. Nevertheless, a common curriculum results in students having the same logical and intellectual biases. Thus, I generally disagree with the fact that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
First of all, for a large nation with a cultural diverse population, it is counter productive to have a singular curriculum. For example, the Indian Education System is divided into multiple state-level education boards which decide the curriculum of each state. As a result, each state structures the curriculum keeping in mind the relevance of the student's cultural, geographic, historic and linguistic background. By giving localised examples while elucidating the lessons and teachings, the imparted knowledge has a more profound impact and stays with the student for a longer duration.
Secondly, consider a scenario where all the students are taught using the same standard curriculum set. Upon being admitted to college, all students will have a common viewpoint in each of the topics covered by the curriculum. As a result, The possibility of diverging views and opinions will be minimized. We are well aware of the fact that debates and discussions help bring out scenarios and perceptions that may not be intuitive in nature. Yet, if all the students present the same line of thinking, there will be no scope of thinking outside the box. Taking any International University into considerations, the university tries to admit students from multiple diverse backgrounds. Will selecting candidates, the universities prefer students of different educational and professional background to be present in the batch to encourage the exchange of new ideas and notions.
Admittedly, by having a common syllabus or curriculum, the problem of different students which different skillsets struggling with the prerequisites of the college can be avoided. The students enrolling in the college will be equipped with all the required educational skills uniformly thus avoiding confusion and chaos. However, with the advent of free forums students can readily take extra courses prior to joining the college to make up for any subjects they lack in. This flexibility offers the possibility of choosing one's own path according to interest and aptitude.
In conclusion, although enforcing a common curriculum for the complete nation may seem like an efficient approach for preparing students for college, this method may take away the creative edge present in the system of diverse educational curriculums. As long as proper guidance is provided to students on what subjects and syllabus need to be covered for a particular college course, the students can readily put in extra efforts to meet the expectations of the college authorities. In fact, many colleges have now prepared a list of topics that an aspiring student needs to be well versed in. All applying students can access this list at any time and make up for any topics that they fall short of by taking extra classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 477, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
... intellectual biases. Thus, I generally disagree with the fact that a nation should require all of its stud...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25641025641 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.135042735043 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105982905983 0.0880659088768 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358974358974 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0119658119658 0.0444667217837 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.135042735043 0.12292977631 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0581196581197 0.0406280797675 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96137748815 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239316239316 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00683760683761 0.0016655270985 411% => OK
Determiners: 0.14188034188 0.0997080785238 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00854700854701 0.0148568991511 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3395.0 2732.02544248 124% => OK
No of words: 536.0 452.878318584 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33395522388 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.421641791045 0.366273622748 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345149253731 0.280924506359 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266791044776 0.200843997647 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15671641791 0.132149295362 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96137748815 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 219.290929204 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511194029851 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.9413854337 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3333333333 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0426370882 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.458333333 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 56.8482587065 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.45794392523 1.64882698954 149% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.556053166303 0.391690518653 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102740976798 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0457534909597 0.077325440228 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547991418661 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110188418894 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228637590391 0.161403998019 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999305330203 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.501245459035 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496907562339 0.0692045440612 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.408573370159 0.275328986314 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570413942337 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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