A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Each country has numerous states and multiple schools in those states with different curriculum followed in each school.The students passing out of these schools are not able to compete with their other state mates sometimes because of the lack of the knowledge of the subject neglected in their curriculum. So in order to provide each student with equal opportunity and learning the national curriculum for the students in the school should be same for everyone as it has many perks which can benefit them.
A nation making all students study the same curriculum until college can help them get the same teaching and information as others and they can compete with them on same terms. The same curriculum will provide with the same study structure and the definite pattern which will be easy for the students and even teachers to manage. India being a diverse country has numerous state boards and one CBSE board which has different curriculum as compared to each board. Students studying in a state board have many difficulties while preparing for advanced examinations for college entry as the medium of study can be different from the national board CBSE, which conducts majorly all the examinations. In order to grasp the understanding of the language and even the subjects, students find difficulties while coping with these changes and they can be rectified if they study under same curriculum. There are many boards which emphasize on the deep learning of any subject and in order to do that they neglect other subjects which are important too and may lead to a failure for their students in future.
The same national curriculum will even help the parents of the students if needed to move from one place to another town as it won't affect the learning of their child and they can find the same curriculum in that state too. In order to judge the students on the merit, it will be easy if they are tested under same conditions and the subjects. However, it is not easy to manage such transparency on this big scale but if students are provided with the option to opt for the subjects which everyone else is studying too, they will take it and can compete with each other on the same scale. Learning is the biggest motto behind each curriculum and if each school in country is proving to be providing the same level of education then it will help the society to grow together. Students in college have the option to opt for their favourite subject and the field of their interest and they can try to study that field at that point of time. But in order to help the student make this decision he/she should be provided with the options which are equal and no subject is given preference in their childhood by the school curriculum.
There is no denying that each child has different mind and the capacity to learn anything, and forcing them to study the same thing as their mate can lead to some negative impacts. The student may lost the touch of imagination and trying out new things as they are confined to study under same regulations and not to try the things out. In order to maintain the touch of desire and imagination, the national curriculum should provide them with equally good options as co-curricular activities which will help these students to be on the verge of trying out new stuffs and learning in their own way.
The different curriculum for different states has shown that the learning of students can take a set back in few subjects which they are not provided with full knowledge as compared to their other mates. These shortcomings can harm their future, and in order to give equal opportunity to each student the nation should set one unique curriculum which every school in the nation follows and provide their students with best and adequate knowledge of each field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 58.6224719101 169% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3152.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 660.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77575757576 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06857624559 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44987584251 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.356060606061 0.4932671777 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 973.8 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.965963561 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.894736842 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7368421053 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273526246433 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121971681628 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570701018873 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193033942998 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486841636716 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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