A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Here the curriculum of the students until they enter the college should not be the same .because it could seriously affect the student's life and his ability to be creative. The basic curriculum should be the same until certain grade and then students should be free to select the programs of their choice.
Firstly, the curriculum of the students should be selected by them based on their on preferences and choices. Suppose let us take a student who is well versed in poetry he should not be enrolled to the calculus class for the sake of his future and another student who is a gifted prodigy for math and calculus who is interested in calculus, trigonometry should not waste his time in learning piano if he is not interested in it.students should be given a chance to select their own programs and curriculum
for the sake of their future, they should be given a chance to embrace their own Picasso or Emerson.
if the students choose the curriculum they prefer, this could be a chance for them to embrace their own gifts and develop them, So that they could lead a path where they can lead their life however they want it to be.if a student is interested in basketball he could be the next Jordan or if he is interested in Boxing he could be next Mike Tyson
Thirdly, the basic curriculum of the students should be same, I mean everyone must learn basic stuff the school teaches, the curriculum must be the same until they reach a certain age to select programs they prefer.
In my opinion, the curriculum of the students should be same until the students are mature enough to select programs they prefer and choose their own path because we should do things what our heart wants not what society wants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, third, thirdly, well, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64052287582 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39488754463 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428104575163 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.943895577 60.3974514979 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.666666667 118.986275619 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 51.0 23.4991977007 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 5.21951772744 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166023819169 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118754243208 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238407646361 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112772384374 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365284609943 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 14.1392134831 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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