A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The issue given talks about the curriculum to be followed in schools nation wide. I think this is a good idea to have a common syllabus for all the students till they reach college where they pursue the course of their interest in depth. this method requires all the educational institutions to teach same subjects to students irrespective of its state or type of schools they are.
The common curriculum helps the children get all the required basic knowledge about their country, about the general knowledge of geography and important aspects essential for everyone going forward.
this way removes many inequalities among pupils. For instance, these days students pay huge amounts of money to get IIT coaching in schools but many people ,though talented might not be able to afford it in that stage. As a result, they lack behind in college and lose good opportunities. When same subject is studied by everyone, the assessment and recognition of talent is easier and it is beneficial for students from low economic background.
Some of the schools train their students on particular subject more than others which might deter the interest of students to pursue other fields of education. this method should be used to make the schools give equal importance to every possible way of study.
this practice might effect students who donot find interest in common subjects but since the basic level of knowledge helps them in later stages of life and gives awareness about the things around, I think this practice is very useful
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the course of their interest in depth. this method requires all the educational ins...
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...sential for everyone going forward. this way removes many inequalities among pup...
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... IIT coaching in schools but many people ,though talented might not be able to aff...
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...udents from low economic background. Some of the schools train their students on particu...
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...ts to pursue other fields of education. this method should be used to make the schoo...
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...ance to every possible way of study. this practice might effect students who dono...
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...le way of study. this practice might effect students who donot find interest in com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53435904689 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3797482965 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156835780165 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602066175415 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404934779123 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829401284956 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532516464386 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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