A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college
Children of today's are the future of tomorrow. What all we teach today to our children will be reflecting after 15 years or so. All chidren has their own goal, some wanted to become Doctor, Engineer, Professor or wanted to go something for their country by joining army or any civil srvices. Children mostly develop from their milieu and decide what they wanted to become in the life. A Professor child knows all the consequence of becoming a professor and so wanted to become like his dad.
A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is correct upto some limit. By making the curriculum same, this give the basic knoweledge of the subject And actually its benevolent for the younger child. At such a less age child don't know in which field he is intersted in, Let a child read all the subject and let him decide what is his area of interest. And in todays era many scholarly fields overlap among themself, so just to be knoweledgable only in one field will help you in succeed in this world. For instance, know we know computer technology has indulge into almost all the industry. just take a example of biology field. If a person only knows about coding stuff and never heard about the biology technical words. It will be very difficult for the person to explain what kind of software they have to develop and even developer will not be able to develop proper until or unless they know about little bit about the biology terms such as thermometer, what is the purpose of thermometer. All this basic things should be taught in the schools.
Cirriculam should be same untill they enter the college, According to me this will be a too late, because children became mature near about at the age of 15 years. College is the place where we go for the professional courses. I think till the eight standard the curriculum should be same, where we tach about all the basic stuff releated to all the fields. After that student should concentrate on the filed in which student is interested in. There is no point in wasting time learnning other which they are not instrested in. For example, A child is more interested in Sports rather then in studies, so let them focus on sports and take some easy s
According to me, the above stated statemented is correect but I wanted to make a some alteration to make it more robust. A nation should require same cirriculum till the eight standard, after that let children decide what to learn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...younger child. At such a less age child dont know in which field he is intersted in,...
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...e, know we know computer technology has indulge into almost all the industry. just take...
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...s indulge into almost all the industry. just take a example of biology field. If a p...
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...into almost all the industry. just take a example of biology field. If a person o...
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Suggestion: little; bit
... proper until or unless they know about little bit about the biology terms such as thermom...
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...his basic things should be taught in the schools. Cirriculam should be same un...
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...basic stuff releated to all the fields. After that student should concentrate on the ...
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...ild is more interested in Sports rather then in studies, so let them focus on sports...
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...focus on sports and take some easy s According to me, the above stated statemented is corree...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62387387387 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40721306542 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4543933317 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7619047619 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302935962666 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956262325568 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171870893403 0.0758088955206 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170753388579 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870194513311 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.