A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author is trying to express his opinions that students of any country are supposed to study the same subjects and every school should have same curriculum for all .
But as soon as a student enters his or her college life , he or she can choose the study he or she wants .This situation is being practised by every other country .
The only difference is that some provide choice of study early while some do it after completion of school . Some of the schools believe in keeping primary education
same for everyone while , after a certain age students are provided with the choice of their stream .
The claim revolves around the proposed ideology of the author that every nation in the world should have the same course , subject and curriculum for all
the students studying there. But as soon as they pass out and start their college life , they should be allowed to study what they want. One thing assumed by the
author here is that he is portraying that every nation will have one national curriculum. This assumption is not truly correct. There are some countries in the world
like India , where we can see different modes of academics are followed in every other state of theirs . Some nations might have one curriculum while some will be
having different course in different schools.
The statement written above is totally wrong . A state doe not necessarily require to provide education of same kind to every other student studying in the
school . Although the choice of streams has been provided, but the time of choosing own modes of study has been provided quite late. The students should be allowed
to go in their own streams from the very beginning . A child might be having some different talent , apart from the subjects which he or she is studying. If he or she
is made to study something different. It will only rust their in-born talent. For example, we all have seen in the last Olympics games that China was among top five
countries in the world to win maximum gold medals. After this incident , we cam to know that children in China are trained very hard from the very beginning and they
are mostly trained in those field at which they will be good at. Although , the training given to young children turned out to be extremely harsh but the overall result
was positive. China was succeeding in sports fields.
Some people might come with the point of view that some basic education and knowledge is required in every field. Students can pursue their choice of
stream till the end of their life. But the point of view is still wrong. Children are taught basic education at a young age. But at the end of their school, they
hardly remember what was taught to them during their early years of age, so there is no point in wasting resources in imparting such primary education. But if a child
is trained at something for what he is good at , he or she will serve as a better human resource for the country. And nowadays , there are many sources like newspaper
, television, Internet from where basic knowledge can be acquired. For example, we all have heard about supermodel Naomi. She started her career around the age of ten.
If she would have wasted her early years in schooling studying the same old subject, she might not be where she is today.
Allowing a student to study for what he or she really wants will not only excel his or her career , but will also help a country to get a good human
resource. Starting training at what you are good at during early childhood makes someone better at his or her field. Studying something for what we are not made for
will only divert us from our goal and will make us doubt our own natural talent. For example, Sachin Tendulkar , the famous Indian cricketer who recently got retired,
joined the Indian cricket team at the age of fourteen. If his parents would have told him to complete his schooling and then his college , he would have lost some crucial
years of his training and might not become an excellent cricketer.
From the past years various schools are modifying themselves in accordance with the interest of their students. Students nowadays have also become smart
and most of them have started working in their choice od stream at a young age. We can see the increasing number of child artists, sport-players etc. This was not possible
earlier. So we should take time to find out what we are good at and start working towards our goal as early as we can .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, then, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.5258426966 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 33.0505617978 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 58.6224719101 169% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3711.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 786.0 442.535393258 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7213740458 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.29487408139 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31080481205 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.399491094148 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1120.5 704.065955056 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.2370786517 203% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2237915517 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.512195122 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1707317073 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70731707317 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.97078651685 604% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 67.0 7.80617977528 858% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182259793138 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456846920566 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679392383093 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574113902483 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681935794746 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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