A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting yo

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

One may reasonably argue that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Surely, requiring that students study the same topics, in the same order, using the same examples and exercises would ensure that students master the concepts necessary to live well and be productive, informed citizens. Unfortunately, while the notion of a standardized, national curriculum may appeal to some individuals who pine for a well-educated citizenry capable of making data-driven decisions with respect to political issues of grave import, the effectiveness of this curriculum rests almost entirely on the assumption that students will actually learn the concepts being taught. Because one cannot guarantee that students will learn the material included in this curriculum, one could never justify the cost and logistical innovation required to create, implement, and enforce the standardized curriculum.

While proponents of a standardized, national curriculum may argue that students would achieve greater mastery of curricular concepts because the standardized curriculum would be created using pedagogical best practice, one cannot force students to study the material using best study practices. Most learning occurs outside of the classroom (i.e., when students study the material presented during class). One cannot ensure that students review the material after class, and therefore, no matter how well the information in the standardized curriculum is presented, one cannot guarantee that it well be effective in imparting knowledge to students. This understood, proponents of the standardized curriculum would effectively argue against those who argue that the pedagogical techniques in the standardized curriculum would be inconsistent with many students’ so-called “learning styles,” insofar as cognitive science has consistently failed to demonstrate the effectiveness of matching one’s study techniques to one’s preferred method of receiving information.

Beyond the fact that one cannot guarantee that students study the advanced curriculum, one could never implement it practically. The cost and effort associated with the development of a standardized curriculum would be significant, and once added to the cost of training teachers to deliver this curriculum and monitoring schools to ensure that teachers are adhering to the standardized curriculum, the cost and effort would be far too much for the federal government to bear. Any good achieved by standardizing the curriculum and producing better-educated citizens would surely be minimized by the harm done from pulling federal funding away from other government programs, such as the maintenance of public schools.

Additionally, the government would need to expend a great deal of effort to ensure educator compliance with the new curriculum, as many teachers resent constraints placed on their ability to adapt curricula to their students and their experiences. One need only look at the resistance to the implementation of the common core curriculum to see how much backlash would result from the adoption of a standardized, national curriculum for all schools. Under these conditions, teachers resented the government’s interference with teacher’s ability to present material in ways that their students would understand. Teachers across the nation believe that they know their students far better than far-removed government officials, and they would strongly resist the development and implementation of this curriculum at almost every stage. This would inevitably increase the cost of implementation and enforcement for the federal government.

Finally, in the interest of student success, the implementation of a standardized, national curriculum would stifle the exploration of individual student interests and largely prevent students from receiving the education and training to excel in their desired careers. A standardized curriculum would necessarily address the interests and concerns of the average student, severely limiting teachers’ ability to challenge high-achieving students and to support those who might not be as intellectually gifted. Not all students have the intellectual capacity or desire to attend college, and to a certain extent, a standardized, national curriculum would neglect the needs and talents of individual students, shepherding them to a common goal that not every student would be able and/or willing to achieve.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 33.0 12.4196629213 266% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3889.0 2235.4752809 174% => OK
No of words: 656.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92835365854 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2621082163 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461890243902 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1205.1 704.065955056 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1530558394 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.684210526 118.986275619 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5263157895 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196244856274 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881601708372 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951227400391 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13243060475 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693951460244 0.0667264976115 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 14.1392134831 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 48.8420337079 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.71 12.1639044944 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 100.480337079 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.8971910112 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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