Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain
The given argument puts forward that there should be laws to preserve any remaining wilderness in its natural state though the areas could be utilized for economic gain. The claim may be questionable since, when the areas could be utilized for economic gain which benefits the overall society. However, I actually agree with the claim made by the argument. To support my position I’ll substantiate with my reasons and examples.
To begin with, in pursuit of economic solidarity and in the name of urbanization, developed nations have already encroached natural resources in an extensive manner imposing serious imbalances over the nature. The bigger issues of climate change and global warming due to natural imbalance poses detrimental effects to human kind. The nations pursuit to economic power is an ever-going one, and expanding cities continually have resulted the natural places and villages turning to concrete cities with no remaining of wilderness in many areas. The places have been completely distorted and the natural essence of the place has vanished away, in most of the modern so called developed countries or regions. If no efforts, is placed to preserve the natural state of the place by a strict formulated law, then some of the wilderness remained will be in jeopardy.
However there are countries where development is in its early pace and ample of natural sites could be utilized in order to have economic gains. Such a situation also requires some law to preserve some of its wilderness whereas economic development should go hand to hand. When people are left uncontrolled and unchecked, encroachment is inevitable. Thus, laws to handle economic pursuits, preserving the natural site in a balance manner is necessary for every nations.
To sum up, the overall happiness and well being of any society is only assured with a balance of economic comforts as well as being in contact with the nature. Nowadays, therapies also have suggested people to spending time in the natural environment, to get rid prevailing mental issues in people’s life. People suggesting the receive of peace and openness of mind in the wilderness is another evidence that efforts should be taken to value and preserve the remaining wildnerness.
Hence, the need of exposure to the natural wilderness is of paramount importance to human life. Without strict laws to preserve and check the exploitation of the natural sites, these areas are likely to be replaced for never ending human pursuits. Thus, every nation must pass laws to preserve enough of the wilderness in its natural state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an extensive manner" with adverb for "extensive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve already encroached natural resources in an extensive manner imposing serious imbalances over the na...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... detrimental effects to human kind. The nations pursuit to economic power is an ever-go...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... remaining of wilderness in many areas. The places have been completely distorted a...
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Line 3, column 808, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... place by a strict formulated law, then some of the wilderness remained will be in jeopardy...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...erness remained will be in jeopardy. However there are countries where development i...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ues in people’s life. People suggesting the receive of peace and openness of mind in the wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, whereas, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19761904762 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72857038976 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7605627158 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.894736842 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1052631579 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478318886524 0.243740707755 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137532276629 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126626314052 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263219345525 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922654350336 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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