Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the mos

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progress seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much progress', 'a good deal of progress'.
Suggestion: much progress; a good deal of progress
...ed alot in development. He has achevied many progress;from smallest particles atomquark to ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the smallest'.
Suggestion: from the smallest
...elopment. He has achevied many progress;from smallest particles atomquark to outside of our h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plant seems to be countable; consider using: 'many plants'.
Suggestion: many plants
...at ie space. During this whole journey, many plant, vegetation,etc are destroyed knowingly...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...is whole journey, many plant, vegetation,etc are destroyed knowingly and unknowingly...
^^^^
Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ral areas present in their country. The authors statement is very true. Firstly, prote...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ible to make balance in the environment.There are different ways to protect natural r...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 406, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ve their life free from human inerfare. These kind of establishment of consevation areas h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resource' or simply 'resources'?
Suggestion: a resource; resources
...out conservation of wildlife: Forest is a resources of lots of foods, oxygen and many more ...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...sential for human survival. To sum up,the only way to continue the life in earth ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of life in earth. For that human should focus on the preservation of the natural...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29562982005 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92924471838 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503856041131 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6155378483 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2307692308 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9615384615 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128595419565 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365729110182 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417682043321 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769353368407 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309262853593 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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