Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

Jungles are one of the blessings of nature to the nations. They are not only the source of economical advantages, but possess several other benefits essential to the nation's needs. Hence, policies should be designed, and measures should be implemented in order to protect these wilderness areas.

Firstly, as the author indirectly juxtaposed economical advantages with benefits of preservation of wilderness areas, I believe that these areas are the potential source of business as well. As today's world is abundant with geeks enthusiastic about wild life, and want to explore animals closely in their natural environment, the need to capture their innate natural habits and broadcast them is raising exponentially. This eventually leads to the introduction of several TV channels specialized in these pursuits and are the major source of business. Furthermore, to closely pick and analyze their lives, the researchers need some especial cameras that can capture them efficiently, which ultimately boost the optical science and market. Hence, if we abandon this wild life, the whole bunch of these economical benefits will be buried with wild animals.

Secondly, these areas are not only beneficial for the folks related to wild life, but also rife with advantages quite helpful for other fields in many ways. For example, usually these areas are an essential source of leaves, flowers and roots used in herbal medicines. Additionally, jungles are the origin of precious woods, and several governments in the world are feeding their nations from the resources gained by exporting these woods. Therefore, wilderness area, is a treasure trove serving many industries of the nation, and hence, should be protected.

Finally, in addition to the industrial and economical advantages, jungles present several other natural gifts to the humans living in the encompassed area. Like, they are the major source of greenery which provides fresh and healthy environment necessary for the humans, especially in the polluted areas. Furthermore, upon exploration, governments usually find unique species of animals which can be kept in the zoo for the world to see and explore.

However, if the basic needs of the nation is related to the land of these areas, for example the major oil reserves have been spotted by the geologists of the nation deprived of petroleum resources, the wilderness areas can be compromised to serve the nation's needs.

In short, wilderness areas are one of the most precious gifts of the nature given to any nation, and should be protected until and unless the basic needs of the people require developing them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3309352518 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7504563008 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501199040767 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3527980533 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.764705882 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30123014785 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958773700549 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04948390302 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166681462775 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341361305896 0.0667264976115 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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