Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
wilderness is the element of the environment that is set by the nature itself. we people are also the part of the nature and we also require some kind of the resource for the survival. but, manipulation of the nature beyond the acceptance limit is lethal itself. In my opinion, Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain because of these three reasons.
Firstly, the ecosystem is main concern for the existence of the healthy environment for the survival of human beings along with other animals. The value of the ecosystem is priceless and its value is incomparable with the value of other economic goods. For instance, suppose on passing the law restricting the areas which is replete with wilderness and natural heritage, it can keep us safe from the terror of the negative environment consequences. For example: mining in some naturally rich minerals can give great profit in terms of money in short term basis but, on the other hand if it is equally important in balancing the environment, the money earn from it becomes trifling. thus, laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain is worthy one.
Secondly, law can make the place with rich wilderness effective in terms of the huge aesthetic beauty and the result can attract the great number of the visitor which alone can benefit the society without degrading its value. In instance, law preserving wilderness can form the great natural heritage with large number of animal and plant diversities. Due to the beauty of it, large number of the visitor can be dragged. again, the place can be research site for the students of the science thus, providing site for the information. On the other hand, various business like hotel, lodge, restaurant, and tourist guide, etc can be served by the purpose. thus, it again bolster the point that laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain is worthy one
At last, the cost of the environment- cost of the degradation of the environment, cannot be paid by us. Instead achieving the economic cost from the exploitation of the place is way more than its cost emerged from its use. For instance, the mining in india results higher environment cost than its 4revenue. The people suffer from the inimical pollution results from its. thus, laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain is relevant.
In conclusion, there may be short term revenue for the use of the place with wilderness. but, we cannot pay the cost generated from its. thus, the purposed law is beneficial in terms opf the cost for the individual, society as well as for the animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90853658537 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58861313043 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414634146341 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0281614352 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.772727273 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31818181818 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413692379225 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142586003989 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184778549794 0.0758088955206 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263779063961 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969968824185 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.