niversities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
people's personality is the collection of experiences that they gather along as they grow up. One of the important aspect of a person is their college life where they are subjected to different experiences. The prompt advocates that universities should urge student to take variety of courses outside of the student field of study. I strongly agree with the statement, and argue that student should have an open mind about the different courses because of the following three reasons.
To begin, studying only one field of study can be mind numbingly monotonous specially if the duration of the course is very long. It may kill the zeal that student may have during the start of the course. If the field of study of a student is engineering or mathematics then studying formulas equations, laws only for four years will be humdrum. If the student take other courses like music, drama or any other courses not related to math or engineering, then it will not be tedious for them. Studies have shown that, studying only one thing for several time is not beneficial and taking enough breaks is essential for productivity. So, taking other courses other than field of study can be regarded as breaks for the students.
Further, as the introduction states that, people are the collection of experiences. One of the best way to gain experiences about different things is to take course on different things. Exposure to different courses will lead students to meet different kind of people with different ideas and different aims in life. One of the important lesson in life is to learn to respect other people different ideas and work together with people having different opinion. Enrolling in different courses gives opportunity for the students to work with people having different ideas, and it will help them to grow as a person.
Though, student start with objective of studying the intended field, they may not be fully aware of the type of field they are about to study. This is true specially in the case of under graduate students. After studying for one or two years, they may find that the course is not what they thought it was. But when student are subjected to variety of courses, then they may find focus on other field. It will be then sagacious to major in that field where student find joy and focus.So, exposure to variety of courses my help the confused student to switch major during their early days.
However, one may argue that, time on the university is limited and should not waste limited time by studying other courses which is not their intended field of study. But studying only one thing is tedious and restrain student from gathering valuable experiences which will be more helpful in future. So, student should be open minded about different courses in the university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... field where student find joy and focus.So, exposure to variety of courses my help...
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...o switch major during their early days. However, one may argue that, time on the...
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Suggestion: in the future
... experiences which will be more helpful in future. So, student should be open minded abou...
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...ut different courses in the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50187663875 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412997903564 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7048057397 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.347826087 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21739130435 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226617299949 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833962978065 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726498380667 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152967851894 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050170414472 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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