Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
To become a well rounded individual, one must acquire knowledge of various fields. Here, prompt states that every college student should enroll in a different course other than their field of study. I mostly agree with statement and think that gaining knowledge from various field is first step toward being a well rounded individual.
To begin with, having knowledge from various fields will help us know about various fields. Yes, we can know about other fields without taking the university courses but when we take a course at a university and spend about a semester learning about that subject, our knowledge of that subject matter will be deeper. And having knowledge about different subject matter will guide us to become a better person.
Secondly, taking variety of courses will help us to break the monotony of studying similar kind of subject every year in the college. For instance, if an engineering student who studies subject which are very technical every year, to study art or literature for a semester will be a break from those subject inclined towards heavy calculations. Studies have shown that a break form intense repeated studying is actually beneficial to the students.So, to break the monotony it is useful to take a different course in a university.
However, the cost of tuition of university courses are not cheap and to enroll in a subject which will not beneficial to us in the later life is not prudent. Similarly, time of a college student is also important and to manage time for a non relevant course is also difficult. There are already various compulsory courses for student to take to complete a degree and if a student is working part time then taking extravagant courses will be daunting to the student.
In conclusion, I my opinion taking various courses in a university will be beneficial to the student because it will help them to become well informed individual. But there are some downsides to the compulsory requirement of extra courses specially to the students who are working part time and those who do not have enough money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
... is actually beneficial to the students.So, to break the monotony it is useful to ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...te a degree and if a student is working part time then taking extravagant courses will be...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ecially to the students who are working part time and those who do not have enough money....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99714285714 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63371546353 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3128156554 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218566434381 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085730189105 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660824787399 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132931294126 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046829440848 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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