In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
The magnitude of success of a book, novel or a poem is greatly dependant on the how the people its targeted at understand it, accept it and relate to it. Hence its of utmost importance for a work of art to be relatable and understandable by the people for its success or veneration.
We live in a world where the success or merit of a movie or a book is measured by the amount of money it earns or the number of copies sold across the world. For. people across the world to buy a book or watch a movie it, they must relate to it. As evidenced by the success of the Batman trilogy, it hits a nerve among many people to be moral, to be sacrificing for a greater cause. The movie was a box office success and also attracting a huge number of audience across the world as it portrays a character that's many people strive to achieve. Books carry a similar weight as movies. As witnessed with the success of many non-fiction or philosophical books which are didactive on how to live your lives to the fullest without wasting time, how to improve yourself are an instant success because of how well people relate to the idea of living lives to the fullest extent. This is not only true for non-fictional works,consider the Harry potter series which is about wizarding world targeted at young audience. It’s famous among adults as well, because it takes them out of the ordinary world where they worry about bills among other tensions of life, to a carefree world free of tensions where a boy goes on adventures against an evil wizard.
Furthermore, If we consider poems especially those that are revered in the contemporary world, strike a nerve. Ravindranath Tagore who is world-renowned poet and author have written many number poems during the time of famine in Bengal which were relatable to people. In dark times they served as hope for the people who lived in tragic conditions. If you take Romeo & Juliet for example, even though it’s a tragic story, is an iconic one among people as it portrays the veritable concept of what true love is supposed to be. This can be true for songs as well, especially in Pop culture. Most songs are relatable to the young people, Even though artists like Justin Bieber have terrible vocals skills and even though he does lip sync when a song is played in the background, ends up filling Arenas because he is relatable to the young people.
Finally, There are also works which are revered in the artistic world but are simply not relatable or understandable to the general public. Lolita a novel about the relationship between a lascivious man and an underage girl is a prime example. For me personally I was surprised at the amount of people who were in awe of the book. On the topic of movies, there might be some which are not understandable on your first watch, such movies include Interstellar, Inception among many others, these movies are very convoluted and requires high discernment to understand them, these are still considered masterpieces.
In conclusion, the world is a medium of expression for an artist for other people to view his work and take it all in. If the people in this world do not understand it, there might not be much use to it, apart from teaching in colleges about how to not write a book, poem or a movie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2709.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61499148211 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63410889364 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47870528109 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 873.0 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7465079361 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.136363636 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6818181818 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243370686702 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746860142139 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612651148198 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154408074474 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509565213739 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.