Parents should be able to monitor and restrict which books, digital media or other information their children access at or check out of the public library.
The statement that "Parents and gurdians should have the system to monitor and restrict the accesability of contents available in the market whether it is book, digital media or other inforlation in easily accessible format by the children" is an interesnting and rather more important topic in today's life. This issue is incresingly important in this age of digital and fast going world in which each and every material without any restriction is available to any one. Furthermore this has a great impact on the material seen by the children in their adolescent stage. As they can be easily influenced and lead them to a wrong path. In this essay i would argue in the favour of this statement.
As discussed above that the material available in the form of books, digital media and many other things have a major impact on the minds of children specially for teenager's age group. As this material like books and comics are designed and decorated in such a beautiful and persuading way that is penetrates in their mind and once habitual about them leads to frustration and annoyance if they don't get things they want. This has lead to a drastic change in mind set of this children from earlier times. According to the statement parents can guide them in a better and more realistic way.
Continuing the above flow, digital media i.e internet, facebook, whatsapp, and many other sources are also a source of this material. There should be a filter available in the system which can monitor and restrict the pages which are not salubrious to the developing mentality os this children. The work that parent did physically as mentioned in above paragraph can be accomplished by a filter in that system. And also the increased explosure of eyes to the brightly luminious screen of this gadgets are harmful for childrens heath, so monitoring system here can help the parents to set limit for the usage of application.
Their are many tv channels that are also to prevented from this children. As for example tatasky company which produces setup boxes for telivision sets have introduced a new system know as locking channels which can lock the channels when needed and when needed can give access to it by entering a pin which is handed over to the parnets at the time of its installing
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I have argued that monitoring and restrictions can help the parents to keep the children away from the hamful and prevent them from its insalubrious effect. Many of the system like parental control in digital gadgets is available, in which one can restrict the particular pages and content from loading. But parents and guardians cannot remain always around their system so there is a need for more accurate monitoring system which can actively and dynamically prevent the children from this type of information.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'as for', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257197696737 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.132437619962 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0863723608445 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403071017274 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307101727447 0.0444667217837 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136276391555 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0403071017274 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74089913593 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249520153551 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117082533589 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268714011516 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0249520153551 0.0148568991511 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2848.0 2732.02544248 104% => OK
No of words: 477.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97064989518 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343815513627 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255765199161 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1928721174 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138364779874 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74089913593 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.5560948776 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.553921551 59.4972553346 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.222222222 141.124799967 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.674092028746 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.0765199161 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.1320754717 1.64882698954 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334741026602 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108763472081 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625210234528 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569845963774 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157524014267 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135616232473 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615714282722 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.431208414288 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10031038971 0.0692045440612 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224025043559 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315271758457 0.0653680567796 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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