Parents should be able to monitor and restrict which books, digital media, or other information their children access at or check out of the public library.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The basis of the issue lies in the question of whether parents should control and limit the wideness of contents that their children would be able to access in public libraries. At a first glance, it could seem reasonable to think that such a system would be a huge advantage for parents since they would be able to monitor every single source of information their children get in contact with. However, from an overall perspective, the freedom of though of their children will be substantially jeopardized and, furthermore, the implementation of this policy would be extremely difficult.
First, the public library is commonly known as a place where children can develop their own imagination. Therefore, the use of a system which would allow their parent to ban some contents would be dramatically dangerous for them. In fact, they would lose the unique opportunity to develop their personal view of the world since they would be forever submitted to their parents' ideological view. Suppose for instance that some parents who believe that God do not exist force their children to accept their view and, furthermore, they block any content related to religion in the public library. Their offspring will never have the possibility to ask themeselves the problem of the existence of any God and, thus, they are likely not to believe in God just because their parents were not doing that and not because it is their own thought.
In addition, this kind of system would be strongly difficult to be implemented. In fact, in order to monitor the actions of the children several controls would have to be imposed. On one side, the monitoration of digital contents would not be that difficult since many informatic systems are able to decide which specifical contents every single account can have access to. In this perspective, if every single child would have his own account the system could seam reasonable to create. However, the real troubles occur when we think about the ban and control of paper contents such as books and cds. In most of the libraries it is possible to find this elements in huge shelves and one of the most beatiful aspects of these infrastructures is how children can be inspired be a content just walking besides these mountains of books. In order to control or ban this kind of contents, many employees woud be needed and the access to the resources would totally lose its initial idea of freedom and imagination. All this is to say that, in the case in which a control system would be implemented, children would not have anymore the chance to travel with their imagination since they should go to the libraries with the titles of the contents wanted already in their mind.
On the other side of the argument, many people could argue that this system would finally allow to keep children away from all he digital contents which are always blamed to be the main source of the increasing violence behaviors among the youngest. However, also keeping in mind the two main drawbacks we have already discussed, this problem should be limited not by libraries, but by parents' education. In fact, children who has been well-educated by their parents try to respect their pricniples even where their have some freedom of choice, as it happens in public library.
In conclusion, the claim that some limitations of content available to children should be implement in public library, is not completely wrong since it would give families many benefits, for instance it would help to prevent young people from violent contents. However, these benefits are strongly overweighted by several drawbacks. Firstly, the free of thougth of the youngest would be jeopardized since without having acces to some ban contents, they would be forever affected by their parents ideological choices. Moreover,this system would be difficult to be implmented and to be managed since in order to do that the asset of library would be affected by many substancial changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...ue that this system would finally allow to keep children away from all he digital conte...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'implemented'?
Suggestion: implemented
...content available to children should be implement in public library, is not completely wr...
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Line 9, column 526, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 34.0 12.4196629213 274% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3313.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 665.0 442.535393258 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98195488722 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07814867018 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66326190768 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41954887218 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1015.2 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9691043588 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.043478261 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9130434783 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.60869565217 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220259892184 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816253170386 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477486480202 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151564686135 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377692338296 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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